List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more varied linking words and avoid starting sentences with 'Thus'. Also, you can add a bit more detail to make your answer richer.

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what to buy. Moreover, it saves me a lot of time as I avoid unnecessary wandering in the stores.

提案: Your answer has some good points, but there are grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'Which interns improves my concentration?'. Try to avoid repeating the examiner's question and focus on giving a clear, structured answer with correct grammar.

例: I don't usually make a list for household chores, but I always make one when I study because it helps me choose topics and stay organized, which improves my concentration.

提案: Good answer with clear reasons and linking words. To improve, you could add a specific example or elaborate a bit more to make your answer more engaging.

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making a list because they find it tedious. Furthermore, since lists remind them of their responsibilities, they often prefer to avoid making them. For example, my friend avoids lists because she feels stressed seeing all her tasks written down.

提案: Your answer is natural and relevant. To improve, try to add a linking phrase and a bit more detail to make your response more complete.

例: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I write lists on paper if I have it handy; however, I usually use my phone because it's always with me and very convenient.

× Which interns improves my concentration?

✓ Which in turn improves my concentration?

The phrase 'Which interns improves' is incorrect because 'interns' is a noun referring to people, which does not fit the intended meaning. The correct phrase is 'which in turn improves', where 'in turn' is an adverbial phrase indicating consequence. This correction fixes the verb phrase and meaning, making the sentence grammatically correct and clear.