List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer clearer and more structured. Avoid unclear phrases like 'insurers idol forgot' and focus on correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' and 'so'. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, especially for groceries, because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget essential items. Moreover, it helps me stick to my budget.

提案: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas. Also, clarify your points with specific examples to make your answer more effective.

例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and ensure I don't forget important tasks. For example, I list my daily duties to complete everything on time.

提案: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Also, avoid short, fragmented sentences and try to explain your ideas more clearly and naturally.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. For example, when shopping for groceries, they might buy whatever catches their eye without planning, which makes them feel free.

提案: Clarify your preference clearly and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas. Also, keep your sentences complete and avoid redundancy.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can check it anytime. I often lose paper lists, so using my phone helps me stay organized.

× Yes, I definitely make a list whenever I go shopping for example groceries because it helps me stay organized and insurers idol forgot an essential items I always do.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list whenever I go shopping, for example, groceries, because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any essential items.

The original sentence has several structural issues including missing commas, incorrect word usage ('insurers idol forgot'), and plural agreement ('an essential items'). Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× My priorities 1st and ensuring it over budget.

✓ My priority is first to ensure I stay within budget.

The original sentence lacks a verb and proper structure. 'Priorities' should be singular 'priority' to match the singular subject, and the phrase is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× He is making a list for my work, definitely helped me to be organized and at the same time we brought up this with regards to my work.

✓ Making a list for my work definitely helps me stay organized, and at the same time, it brings up important points regarding my work.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'He' instead of 'I' or omits the subject properly, and mixes tenses. Correcting pronouns and verb forms clarifies meaning and maintains tense consistency.

× This will ensure that I don't forget anything important. And also make it. Everything on time as. For example.

✓ This ensures that I don't forget anything important and also helps me complete everything on time, for example.

Fragmented sentences and unclear pronoun references are corrected to form a coherent sentence with proper conjunctions and verb forms.

× I think some people prefer to be spontaneous and free and making any decisions.

✓ I think some people prefer to be spontaneous and free and avoid making any decisions.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'and making' where 'avoid making' or similar is needed to convey the intended meaning. Correct conjunction and verb form improve clarity.

× Just for example, in buying groceries, many people prefer it to buy whatever they see.

✓ For example, when buying groceries, many people prefer to buy whatever they see.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Removing it and restructuring the sentence improves grammatical correctness.

× They don't have any plans. For their groceries or their food, so. This will help them to be free all day.

✓ They don't have any plans for their groceries or food, so this helps them to be free all day.

Fragmented sentences are combined and pronoun references clarified for better flow and grammatical accuracy.

× I would rather she was making a list on form 10 and paper because first of all it is convenient.

✓ I would rather make a list on my phone than on paper because, first of all, it is convenient.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'she was making' and 'form 10' which seems to be a mishearing or typo. Correct pronouns and expressions are used to convey the intended meaning.

× You can see it every time. Anytime you want to see it while on paper it then I tend to lose.

✓ You can see it anytime you want, while with paper, I tend to lose it.

The original sentence has awkward conjunctions and structure. Correcting conjunctions and sentence flow improves clarity.

× Things all the time, so phone would. Be more preferable for me.

✓ I lose things all the time, so the phone would be more preferable for me.

Fragmented sentence and missing articles are corrected to form a complete and grammatically correct sentence.