List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by adding a linking word and a bit more detail to make it more natural and effective. For example, you could explain how it saves time or mention a specific instance.

例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and, as a result, saves me a lot of time at the store.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and avoid repetition. Also, correct the phrase 'make let's' to 'make lists'.

例: I don't usually make lists for house chores, but I always make a list when I study because it helps me choose topics and stay organized, which really helps me focus.

提案: Your answer is good but contains a small error ('making less' should be 'making lists'). Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a bit more specific detail.

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it boring. Moreover, making lists reminds them of their responsibilities, which they may want to avoid.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words unnecessarily and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: It depends; sometimes I write lists on paper if it's available, but other times I use my phone because it's always with me and very convenient.

× Does it work? I don't usually make let's for house chores, but I always make a list. When I study because it helps me choose topics and stay organized.

✓ Does it work? I don't usually make lists for house chores, but I always make a list when I study because it helps me choose topics and stay organized.

The word 'let's' is a contraction for 'let us' and is incorrectly used here instead of 'lists'. Also, the sentence 'When I study because it helps me choose topics and stay organized.' is a sentence fragment and should be combined with the previous sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Moreover, making less remind them of their responsibilities which they may want to avoid.

✓ Moreover, making lists reminds them of their responsibilities which they may want to avoid.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the correct plural noun is 'lists'. Also, the verb should be 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'making lists'.

× It depends. Sometimes I write lists the lists on paper if it's available, but other times I used my phone because it's always with me and very convenient to use.

✓ It depends. Sometimes I write lists on paper if it's available, but other times I use my phone because it's always with me and very convenient to use.

The verb 'used' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'use' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'write lists the lists' is redundant; 'write lists' is sufficient.