List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“make a shopping”应为“make a shopping list”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

例: It depends on how many items I need to buy. If I have a long list, I usually make a shopping list to stay organized. But if I only need one or two things, I just go shopping without a list.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“under give me more clear points”表达不准确，且句子不够连贯。建议使用连词连接句子，并注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and gives me clear points to prepare effectively.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但用词不够准确，如“redundant thing”不合适。建议使用更自然的表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I think some people find making lists a bit complicated and unnecessary, so they prefer to do things spontaneously without planning.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“delete husks”应为“daily tasks”，句子断裂且表达不清晰。建议注意句子完整性和词汇准确性。

例: I usually write my study plans in a small notebook. However, for daily necessities or tasks, I prefer to quickly add them to my phone.

× For instance, if I buy a lot of things, then I'll make a shopping to make it clearer.

✓ For instance, if I buy a lot of things, then I'll make a shopping list to make it clearer.

这里'shopping'是不可数名词，应该用'shopping list'表示购物清单，缺少了名词'list'导致表达不完整。

× However, if I will buy just a one or two things, I will just go shopping.

✓ However, if I buy just one or two things, I will just go shopping.

'a one or two things'中'one'前不需要冠词'a'，且'things'是复数，'one'应单独使用，去掉'a'更符合语法。

× For my work, I will definitely make a list because it can help me to stay organized under give me more clear points to prepare for my work.

✓ For my work, I definitely make a list because it can help me stay organized and give me clearer points to prepare for my work.

'will'在此处不合适，表达习惯用一般现在时；'under'用错，应为'and'连接两个并列动作；'more clear'应为比较级'clearer'。

× Well, I think that they think that it is a little bit complicated and the redundant thing to make a list.

✓ Well, I think that they think that it is a little bit complicated and redundant to make a list.

'the redundant thing'表达不自然，'redundant'作为形容词直接修饰动词不定式更合适，去掉'the'和'thing'。

× Well, I usually make my study plan list on. The paper on my little notebook.

✓ Well, I usually make my study plan list on paper in my little notebook.

'on. The paper'断句错误，应连成一句；'on paper'表示在纸上，'in my little notebook'表示在笔记本里，介词使用需调整。

× However, As for the daily necessities or delete husks, I will usually quickly put it on my phone.

✓ However, as for the daily necessities or delete husks, I will usually quickly put them on my phone.

'it'指代复数名词'daily necessities or delete husks'不正确，应使用复数代词'them'。