List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember what items I need to buy and saves time while shopping. For example, last week I prepared a list of groceries, so I didn't forget anything important.

提案: Your answer has some good points but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure to improve naturalness.

例: Yes, I like to write a to-do list for my work. It helps me organize my tasks and remember what I need to do the next day. For instance, I check my list every morning to plan my day efficiently.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks specific supporting details. Avoid negative or judgmental language like 'lazy.' Instead, explain reasons clearly and provide examples using linking words to improve coherence.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally. However, I believe making a list is helpful because it organizes tasks and improves efficiency.

提案: Your answer shows a clear preference but is unclear and contains errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain reasons. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and improve vocabulary usage.

例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because I enjoy the traditional method. For example, crossing off items on paper gives me a sense of satisfaction that checking off on a phone does not.

× This site off on my kill list when I shop so before going to shopping I always prepared a list of saying what item should buy an while shopping I take the items I already get into the court already boarded the cart and.

✓ This site is off on my kill list when I shop, so before going shopping, I always prepare a list saying which items I should buy, and while shopping, I take the items I already put into the cart.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure errors including run-on sentences and unclear phrasing. 'Prepared' should be 'prepare' to match present tense. 'Going to shopping' should be 'going shopping'. 'Saying what item should buy' is unclear and corrected to 'saying which items I should buy'. 'Get into the court already boarded the cart' is unclear and corrected to 'put into the cart'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I'm a person who want to or like to write everything I said To Do List.

✓ Yes, I'm a person who wants to or likes to write everything in a To Do List.

The verbs 'want' and 'like' need to agree with the singular subject 'person', so they should be 'wants' and 'likes'. Also, 'I said To Do List' is incorrect; it should be 'in a To Do List' to indicate where things are written.

× It's helped me to organize the things and help me to remember what you do for the next days.

✓ It helps me to organize things and helps me to remember what I have to do for the next days.

The original sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'helped' and mixes pronouns 'you' instead of 'I'. The present tense 'helps' fits better as the habit is ongoing. Also, 'the things' is simplified to 'things' for naturalness.

× So I always do check the list for the things that I already.

✓ So I always check the list for the things that I have already done.

The phrase 'do check' is awkward; 'always check' is more natural. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'have already done' completes the thought and uses present perfect tense to indicate completed actions relevant to now.

× They're lazy enough to write something.

✓ They are too lazy to write something.

The phrase 'lazy enough' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'too lazy' to indicate inability or unwillingness. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't think it's a big deal to write a short do list before you doing anything.

✓ I don't think it's a big deal to write a short to-do list before you do anything.

The phrase 'before you doing anything' is incorrect; it should be 'before you do anything' because 'before' is followed by the base verb form, not the -ing form. Also, 'do list' is corrected to 'to-do list'.

× It's always help me to do things efficiently and.

✓ It always helps me to do things efficiently.

'It's always help' is incorrect; it should be 'It always helps' to agree in number and tense. The sentence is incomplete; the corrected version ends properly.

× I always prefer to make at least on a paper rather on a phone because I always like the traditional way of listing because the satisfaction when you get.

✓ I always prefer to make at least one list on paper rather than on a phone because I like the traditional way of listing and the satisfaction you get from it.

The phrase 'make at least on a paper' is corrected to 'make at least one list on paper'. 'Rather on a phone' is corrected to 'rather than on a phone' to use the correct preposition. The sentence is restructured for clarity and completeness.

× Making that Ticani out paper is totally different from you checking on the phone and I'm always trying to do.

✓ Making that ticked out on paper is totally different from checking on the phone, and I always try to do it.

The phrase 'Ticani out paper' is unclear; assumed to mean 'ticked out on paper'. 'You checking' is corrected to 'checking'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.