List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many errors that affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid redundancy. For example, say "No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. Sometimes I pick up items that catch my eye."

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. Sometimes I pick up items that catch my eye, which makes shopping more enjoyable for me.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes, which makes it difficult to understand. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain how making lists helps you at work with specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me stay organised. For example, I write down important deadlines and tasks, so I don't forget to submit anything on time.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons why some people dislike making lists. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. Also, some may feel confident enough to remember tasks without writing them down.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to give a clear preference and explain why, using specific reasons and linking words. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on coherence.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and easy to carry around. Unlike paper lists, I can edit or delete items quickly on my phone.

× Node. I don't make a list when I'm sharp.

✓ No. I don't make a list when I shop.

The word 'Node' is a mispronunciation or incorrect use of the pronoun 'No'. Also, 'sharp' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'shop'. The sentence should be 'No. I don't make a list when I shop.' to correctly answer the question.

× Usually I was just late shot randomly and buy something.

✓ Usually I just shop randomly and buy something.

The phrase 'I was just late shot' is incorrect. The intended meaning is present habitual action, so present tense 'I just shop randomly' is appropriate. 'Late shot' is a mishearing or mispronunciation of 'shop'.

× Anything else if I see something I'm favor.

✓ Or if I see something I like.

The phrase 'I'm favor' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I like'. Also, 'Anything else if' is awkward; 'Or if' is better to connect the ideas.

× Yes, I make always for my work and I think it's really useful to me I'm.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and I think it's really useful to me.

The adverb 'always' should come before the verb 'make'. Also, 'make always' is incorrect word order. The phrase 'to me I'm' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'to me'.

× Always mark down the date.

✓ I always mark down the date.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'I' clarifies who performs the action.

× It's just. And that line and he mentioned me to do some anything in which is important.

✓ It's just a line where it reminds me to do something important.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× What I need to submit?

✓ What I need to submit.

This is a fragment; it should be a statement or a question. For a question, 'What do I need to submit?' is correct. However, as part of a sentence, 'what I need to submit' is acceptable.

× So it really worse because I node and.

✓ So it's really worse because I don't know.

'Node' is a mispronunciation of 'don't know'. Also, 'worse' needs a verb 'is' to be correct: 'it's really worse'.

× I think the main reason why. Some people don't like anlysis just because they're lazy.

✓ I think the main reason why some people don't like analysis is just because they're lazy.

The sentence is fragmented. 'Anlysis' is a misspelling of 'analysis'. The sentence should be combined and completed with 'is'.

× They're just too lazy to write down anything. And in macOS Dan. Not is richer.

✓ They're just too lazy to write down anything. And in my case, I don't use it.

'In macOS Dan. Not is richer.' is unintelligible. Likely intended to say 'In my case, I don't use it.' The original contains mispronunciations and incorrect pronouns.

× Note the date.

✓ Note the date.

This sentence is correct as is.

× Or maybe their confidence to remember that date or something else.

✓ Or maybe their lack of confidence to remember that date or something else.

The sentence is missing a word to clarify meaning. 'Their confidence' should be 'their lack of confidence' to explain why they don't like making lists.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone since.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because

The word 'since' is used incorrectly here. 'Because' is more appropriate to explain the reason.

× Make a list on my phone is Sims.

✓ Making a list on my phone is simple.

'Sims' is a mispronunciation of 'simple'. Also, the gerund form 'Making' is needed as the subject of the sentence.

× Really convenience and I have.

✓ Really convenient and I have it.

'Convenience' is a noun; the adjective 'convenient' is needed here. Also, the sentence is incomplete without an object.

× Michelis. On paper, before bread.

✓ Lists on paper before, but

'Michelis' and 'bread' are mispronunciations. The intended meaning is unclear but likely 'lists on paper before, but'. The sentence is incomplete and needs clarification.

× 'Cause, as a paper showed, is not easy to carry it and I just want.

✓ 'Cause paper lists are not easy to carry, and I just want to use my phone.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect pronouns and articles. Rephrasing improves clarity and grammar.