List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng các từ nối để liên kết các ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ lý do bạn làm danh sách và lợi ích của nó một cách cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. Moreover, having a list helps me stay within my budget and avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về việc bạn có làm danh sách cho công việc hay không và hiệu quả của nó. Tránh nói lặp lại và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, mạch lạc.

例: I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to start tasks directly. However, sometimes making a list helps me organize my work better and be more productive.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai (ví dụ 'licking lips' thay vì 'making lists'). Bạn nên trình bày các lý do một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.

例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes too much time and they feel it is not very effective. Also, some prefer to rely on memory or handle tasks spontaneously.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. I always carry my phone with me, and I find typing easier than writing since my handwriting is quite bad.

× On my shop every time I go shopping, firstly this 'cause I'm not very good at memorizing things so it had me too for not to forget what I need to buy.

✓ When I shop every time I go shopping, firstly this is because I'm not very good at memorizing things so it helps me not to forget what I need to buy.

The phrase 'On my shop' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'When I shop' or 'Every time I go shopping'. Also, 'this 'cause' should be 'this is because'. 'Had me too for not to forget' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me not to forget'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× More over, it also helped me to stay within my budget and avoid pushed by.

✓ Moreover, it also helps me to stay within my budget and avoid overspending.

'More over' should be 'Moreover' as one word. 'Avoid pushed by' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'avoid overspending' or 'avoid being pushed to spend more'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects preposition and verb usage.

× And really make a list from a worse 'cause I think it is not very important but just go straight into what I need to do.

✓ I don't really make a list for work because I think it is not very important and just go straight into what I need to do.

'From a worse' is incorrect; it should be 'for work'. Also, 'And really make a list' is awkward; 'I don't really make a list' is clearer. The conjunction 'but' should be 'and' to connect the ideas properly.

× I think there are several reasons why people don't like licking lips.

✓ I think there are several reasons why people don't like making lists.

'Licking lips' is a mishearing or mispronunciation of 'making lists'. Correcting this pronoun and phrase clarifies the intended meaning.

× Firstly, I think is 'cause. It takes too much time for them and bring not very. Much of effect, moreover, I think people just hit it.

✓ Firstly, I think it's because it takes too much time for them and doesn't have much effect. Moreover, I think people just avoid it.

'Is 'cause' should be 'it's because'. 'Bring not very much of effect' is incorrect; it should be 'doesn't have much effect'. 'People just hit it' is unclear; likely intended 'people just avoid it'. These corrections fix preposition and verb usage for clarity.

× So that is the reason why I think people don't like making this.

✓ So that is the reason why I think people don't like making lists.

'Making this' is vague; it should be 'making lists' to refer back to the topic. Correcting the pronoun clarifies the sentence.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient firstly.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient.

'Firstly' is unnecessary here and disrupts the sentence flow. Removing it improves clarity.

× You can bring your phone with you every time and moreover.

✓ You can bring your phone with you every time; moreover,

The sentence is incomplete and 'moreover' should be connected properly with a semicolon or start a new sentence. Correct punctuation improves readability.

× I think I am good. I am better at testing. An then writing because my handwriting is very terrible.

✓ I think I am good. I am better at texting than writing because my handwriting is very bad.

'Testing' should be 'texting'. 'An then' should be 'than'. 'Very terrible' is incorrect; 'very bad' is appropriate. These corrections fix word choice and comparative structure.