Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but it is fragmented and lacks coherence. Try to form complete sentences and connect your ideas smoothly using linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I love singing because it allows me to express my emotions. For example, singing sad songs helps me release my feelings, while funny songs lift my mood. After singing, I usually feel energized and refreshed.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains many short, incomplete sentences and some grammatical errors. Try to respond with full sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

例: Unfortunately, I have never learned how to sing because I have always been busy studying academic subjects. However, I still love singing very much and enjoy it as a hobby.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use complete sentences and clarify your ideas. Also, avoid informal contractions like 'wanna' in formal speaking tests.

例: I want to sing for my partners because songs can express my feelings better than words. I believe they can understand my emotions through the songs I sing.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear due to pronunciation errors and fragmented sentences. Use clear, complete sentences and appropriate vocabulary to express your thoughts.

例: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because when they hear or sing songs, it lifts their spirits and makes them feel joyful inside.

× I love when I can express all my feelings through singing all the lyrics in these sad songs, in the funny songs and.

✓ I love when I can express all my feelings by singing all the lyrics in these sad songs and the funny songs.

The phrase 'through singing all the lyrics' is awkward and unclear. Using 'by singing' is the correct way to express the means of expressing feelings. Also, 'in the funny songs and' is incomplete and should be connected properly with 'and the funny songs.'

× I feel that. All the energy. In. That day will be charged after singing SO.

✓ I feel that all the energy in that day will be charged after singing.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Unfortunately that I have never learned how to sing.

✓ Unfortunately, I have never learned how to sing.

The phrase 'Unfortunately that I have never learned' is incorrect. The word 'that' is unnecessary and should be removed. Also, a comma after 'Unfortunately' improves readability.

× Because I don't have time to. Do that as I always have to study others. Subjects.

✓ Because I don't have time to do that as I always have to study other subjects.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary periods. 'Others' should be 'other' to correctly modify 'subjects.' Combining into one sentence improves flow and correctness.

× Like academic subjects? However, I still. Love singing so much?

✓ Like academic subjects. However, I still love singing so much.

The original sentences are fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. Changing the question marks to periods and combining the fragments into complete sentences improves grammatical correctness.

× I wanna sing for my partners. Because. Only songs can express my feelings to them in only them can understand the feelings.

✓ I want to sing for my partners because only songs can express my feelings to them, and only they can understand those feelings.

'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to.' The sentence fragments should be combined. 'Only them can understand' is incorrect; the subject pronoun 'they' is needed. Also, 'the feelings' should be 'those feelings' for clarity.

× I provide through the song.

✓ I express them through the song.

The verb 'provide' is incorrect in this context; 'express' fits better. Also, 'them' refers to feelings and should be included for clarity.

× Of course, singing can bring Phil fullness to people because whenever people hear songs or whenever they sing, they can feel. Little happiness in their heart and they can feel that they are G is hyped, hyped up.

✓ Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because whenever people hear songs or sing, they can feel a little happiness in their hearts and feel hyped up.

'Phil fullness' is a misspelling of 'happiness.' The sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary words like 'G is.' 'Little happiness' should be 'a little happiness,' and 'heart' should be plural 'hearts' to agree with 'people.' Removing unnecessary words and correcting spelling improves clarity.