Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobingizda "convertible" so'zi noto'g'ri ishlatilgan va bu javobni tushunishni qiyinlashtiradi. Ingliz tilida aniq va to'g'ri so'zlarni tanlashga e'tibor bering. Shuningdek, javobni biroz qisqartiring va ortiqcha so'zlardan qoching.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and improves my mood.

提案: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va noaniqliklar mavjud. "I think I have" jumlasi aniq emas. Shuningdek, gaplarni yaxshiroq bog'lash uchun bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning.

例: I have never taken singing lessons, but I believe I have a natural talent, so I enjoy singing in my free time.

提案: Javobda grammatik xatolar va noaniq ifodalar bor. "Listening musics" noto'g'ri, to'g'ri shakli "listening to music". Gaplarni aniq va to'g'ri shaklda ifodalashga harakat qiling.

例: I want to sing for my mother because she enjoys music as much as I do.

提案: Javob juda qisqa va tushunarsiz. "It's Ken" degan jumla ma'nosiz. To'liq va aniq gaplar bilan fikringizni ifoda eting.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their emotions and feel joyful.

× Yeah, of course I'm into singing because it makes me convertible and boosts my energy and mood.

✓ Yeah, of course I'm into singing because it makes me comfortable and boosts my energy and mood.

The word 'convertible' is incorrectly used here; the correct adjective is 'comfortable' to express a feeling of ease or enjoyment. 'Convertible' refers to something that can be changed or transformed, which does not fit the context.

× I have never learned how to sing, but I think I have. Natural talent to sing, so that's why I enjoy while singing in my free time.

✓ I have never learned how to sing, but I think I have a natural talent for singing, so that's why I enjoy singing in my free time.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Natural talent to sing' is incomplete and should be connected properly. Also, 'enjoy while singing' is incorrect; 'enjoy singing' is the correct form.

× Actually I want sing for my mother because she was also listening musics like me, so that's why I want to sing for her music.

✓ Actually, I want to sing for my mother because she also listens to music like me, so that's why I want to sing for her.

The verb 'want' should be followed by 'to sing' (infinitive form). 'Was also listening musics' is incorrect; it should be 'also listens to music' because 'music' is uncountable and the present tense fits the context better.

× Yeah, of course it's Ken. Bring happiness for us.

✓ Yeah, of course it can bring happiness to us.

'It's Ken' is incorrect and unclear; likely a typo for 'it can'. Also, 'bring happiness for us' should be 'bring happiness to us' because 'bring to' is the correct prepositional phrase.