Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够流畅，句子结构有误，且例子表达不够清晰。建议注意语法正确性，避免断句错误，并用连词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relieve stress. For example, after a long day, I often sing in the shower to relax and feel refreshed.

提案: 你的回答内容混乱，语法和词汇使用错误较多，导致表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免无关或错误的内容，使用简单正确的句子表达观点。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing formally. However, I enjoy singing by myself to cheer myself up when I feel stressed.

提案: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的句子结构，明确表达自己的想法，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: To be honest, I only want to sing for myself because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. I am afraid to sing for others because I worry they might judge me.

提案: 你的回答内容较好，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的词汇，并用连词使句子更流畅。

例: Of course, singing helps people express their emotions and reduce stress. Especially in today's high-pressure society, I often feel more positive after singing my favorite songs.

× I used to singing in the shower to relax.

✓ I used to sing in the shower to relax.

“used to”后面应接动词原形，不能接动名词形式。这里应使用“sing”而不是“singing”。

× I like your confidence in my voice and more freedom title.

✓ I like your confidence in my voice and more freedom to express myself.

句子中“your confidence in my voice”表达不清，且“more freedom title”不合语法，应改为“more freedom to express myself”以表达“更多自由表达自己”的意思。

× I think I replied late.

✓ I think I replied late.

该句语法结构不完整，且语义不明确，建议改为“I think I replied late”或更清晰表达意图的句子。

× However, I sometimes this thing to cheer myself.

✓ However, I sometimes do this to cheer myself up.

缺少动词，句子不完整，应补充动词“do”并加上“up”构成短语“cheer myself up”，表示“使自己振作”。

× Apple will I feel stressed and Terrell.

✓ I will feel stressed and terrible.

“Apple”应为“I will”，“Terrell”应为“terrible”，且句子结构混乱，需调整为“I will feel stressed and terrible”。

× If I think for others so I'm afraid as I thought they would be scribe away.

✓ If I think about others, I'm afraid they would describe me away.

“think for others”应为“think about others”，“as I thought”多余且不通顺，“scribe away”应为“describe me away”或更合适表达，需调整句子使其通顺。

× because singing help people express their emotions and reduce stress.

✓ because singing helps people express their emotions and reduce stress.

主语“singing”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故“help”应改为“helps”。