Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response to the question with a clear reason, and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel happy and relaxed, especially during my free time.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Please give a clear yes or no answer, and explain briefly if you have or have not learnt singing. Use simple and correct sentences.

例: No, I have never formally learnt how to sing, but I enjoy watching singing videos online to improve my skills.

提案: Your answer is too short and unclear. Provide a complete sentence explaining who you want to sing for and why. This will make your answer more natural and effective.

例: I want to sing for myself because it helps me express my feelings and enjoy the moment.

提案: Your answer is very unclear and does not directly answer the question. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and forget their worries for a while.

× I guess I like singing. Happy times. I'm saying.

✓ I guess I like singing because it makes me happy.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure. 'Happy times' and 'I'm saying' do not form a coherent sentence. Combining the ideas into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually no, I I don't know how to say yes. I saw some video in with you. Balance. We only had in my singing. I believe that there sending is not just Willy profession.

✓ Actually, no, I don't know how to say yes. I saw some videos about singing. I believe that singing is not just a silly profession.

The original sentence contains multiple fragments and unclear phrases. 'I I don't know how to say yes' has repetition and awkward phrasing. 'I saw some video in with you. Balance.' is unclear and fragmented. Correcting these into coherent sentences with proper vocabulary and structure improves understanding.

× Sing for myself. Stop making sense.

✓ I want to sing for myself. It makes sense to me.

The original sentences are fragments and do not convey a clear meaning. Adding subjects and verbs forms complete sentences that express the intended idea clearly.

× See you again yes again can bring happiness to be worried because. Listen in rebate which will be in life. It ain't really change their mind. Compared to the mass and no, something wrong?

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness and reduce worries. Listening to music can help in life. It can really change people's minds. Compared to the past, nothing is wrong.

The original sentences are fragmented and incoherent. Reconstructing them into complete, meaningful sentences clarifies the intended message and corrects grammatical errors.