Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'you asthetic'. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại.

例: No, I don't like singing because I am not good at it and I don't enjoy activities related to music.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý rõ ràng.

例: Yes, I learned singing in high school as part of the curriculum. We practiced singing in a choir and also learned to play some simple instruments.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ đúng ngữ cảnh.

例: I don't usually like to sing, but if I had to, I would sing for my parents because they always say I can't sing well.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ dùng không chính xác như 'alleviate straight'. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness. When I feel sad, I listen to music on YouTube, which helps me relax and reduce stress.

× Honestly I would say no because I'm not good at singing or any. Or anything related you asthetic.

✓ Honestly, I would say no because I'm not good at singing or anything related to aesthetics.

The phrase 'related you asthetic' is incorrect. It should be 'related to aesthetics' to correctly use the preposition 'to' and the noun 'aesthetics'. Also, 'or any' is incomplete and should be 'or anything'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, of course singing is. The ones of the subject that come pensa rates in the curriculum when was in high school. And we will we will learn about how to sing the chorus or how to play the one inch instrument.

✓ Yes, of course. Singing was one of the subjects included in the curriculum when I was in high school. We learned how to sing in the chorus and how to play a musical instrument.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain unclear phrases like 'come pensa rates' and 'one inch instrument'. The correction restructures the sentences for clarity and grammatical correctness, using past tense 'was' and 'learned' to match the time frame.

× Under, under, I don't want to sing, but if you have a chance, I want to send you my parents because they always think that I don't know how to sing.

✓ Actually, I don't want to sing, but if I had a chance, I would sing for my parents because they always think that I don't know how to sing.

The phrase 'Under, under' is unclear and likely a mishearing or mispronunciation. 'Send you my parents' is incorrect; it should be 'sing for my parents'. Also, conditional tense is used to express hypothetical situations ('if I had a chance, I would sing').

× Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness because when I have no sadness, I. Tend to find some music on YouTube and I found that this helped me to relax and alleviate straight.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness because when I am sad, I tend to find some music on YouTube, and I find that it helps me to relax and alleviate stress.

The phrase 'when I have no sadness' is awkward; 'when I am sad' is clearer. 'I. Tend' is a typo and should be 'I tend'. 'I found' should be present tense 'I find' to match the habitual action. 'Alleviate straight' is incorrect; it should be 'alleviate stress'.