Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，存在语法和表达错误，建议练习简单句的正确表达，避免无意义的词汇和句子碎片。

例: Yes, I definitely like singing because it makes me happy and helps me relax after a long day.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但可以增加细节和连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally, but I'm interested and would like to find a good teacher so I can improve my skills.

提案: 回答中断且语法错误较多，建议练习完整句子表达，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I want to sing for my parents and best friends. In the future, if I have a partner, I would like to sing for him or her as well.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法和词汇错误严重，建议多练习表达观点的完整句子，并使用恰当的词汇。

例: Yes, definitely. I think singing is very useful because it allows people to enjoy life and can lift someone's spirit.

× Yes, I definitely like singing. Because he makes me happy and enjoy the songs.

✓ Yes, I definitely like singing because it makes me happy and I enjoy the songs.

句子不能以连词Because开头，且主语和谓语不一致。应将两个句子合并，主语用it指代singing，动词保持一致。

× A Sydney makes me and. Motivated in the UM. What rooms? And are very happy.

✓ Singing makes me motivated and very happy.

原句结构混乱，词语无意义。应简化为完整句子，表达唱歌使我有动力且开心。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

learn的过去分词在美式英语中为learned，更常用。根据语境，使用learned更合适。

× I want to sing. For my parents or my best friends? If the future I have my lover, I want you say to him.

✓ I want to sing for my parents or my best friends. If in the future I have a lover, I want to sing to him.

句子断裂且语序错误，应合并句子并调整词序，使表达完整且通顺。

× If the future I have my lover, I want you say to him.

✓ If in the future I have a lover, I want to say to him.

you应改为I，代词使用错误，且缺少介词in。

× Yes, definitely. I think seeing is very useful and is. You Sir, chance to enjoy the life and bring. Something up? Please someone's. Spirit.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think singing is very useful and gives you a chance to enjoy life and lift someone's spirit.

原句断裂且词语错误，seeing应为singing，句子应连贯表达唱歌的积极作用。