Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer should be more natural and clear. Avoid repeating words and try to explain why you like singing with specific reasons. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use correct grammar.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. My favorite songs are 'Super Masallah' and 'Body'. Singing makes me feel happy and confident.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question and provide clear supporting details using simple sentences and linking words.

例: I have not formally learnt how to sing, but I enjoy singing songs in my free time. Some songs are difficult to sing, but I practice to improve.

提案: Your answer should be clearer and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain why you want to sing for your parents.

例: I like to sing for my mother and father because it makes them happy. Singing for them is a way to show my love and appreciation.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Please provide a clear opinion and explain your reasons with specific details and linking words.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it lifts their mood and helps them relax. Many people enjoy singing to feel joyful.

× Yes, I like singing because I interest in singing and my favorite favorite the single is Super Masallah and Body also so that I like singing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I am interested in singing and my favorite song is Super Masallah and Body also, so I like singing.

The phrase 'I interest in singing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I am interested in singing' because 'interested' is an adjective that requires the verb 'to be'. Also, 'the single' should be 'song' to be more appropriate. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I'd I would like to learn the singing, but in my leisure time I like to sing some song.

✓ I would like to learn singing, but in my leisure time I like to sing some songs.

The phrase 'I'd I would like' is redundant; 'I would like' suffices. 'Learn the singing' is incorrect; 'learn singing' is correct. 'Some song' should be plural 'some songs' to indicate more than one.

× I am not understood her name.

✓ I do not know her name.

The sentence 'I am not understood her name' is grammatically incorrect. The correct expression is 'I do not know her name' to convey the intended meaning.

× Cottages were difficult to form.

✓ The notes were difficult to form.

The word 'Cottages' seems incorrect in context; likely the intended word is 'notes'. Also, 'were difficult to form' is acceptable but clarifying the subject improves understanding.

× I like to sing on my mother and father.

✓ I like to sing for my mother and father.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'for' when indicating the person you sing to.

× I like go on single my mother and father.

✓ I like to sing for my mother and father.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Correcting to 'I like to sing for my mother and father' conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, of course. Because the the Basques single buggy so. I see.

✓ Yes, of course, because singing brings happiness. I see.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases like 'the Basques single buggy so'. Rewriting to 'because singing brings happiness' fits the context and question. 'I see' is kept as is.