Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强基本句型的练习，避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并且注意时态和单词拼写。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. I often sing my favorite songs at home. Although I'm not very good at it, singing makes me feel happy and comfortable.

提案: 回答内容不连贯且有许多语法和词汇错误，建议学习如何用完整句子表达过去的经历，并且注意词汇的准确使用。可以尝试简洁地说明自己是否学过唱歌及原因。

例: No, I have never learned how to sing. When I was a child, my parents wanted me to learn, but I was not interested. I preferred other hobbies, especially sports.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议练习如何用完整句子表达自己的想法，并且避免重复。可以尝试直接回答问题并说明原因。

例: Actually, I don't want to sing for anyone because I'm not good at singing. I prefer to write something for others instead of singing.

提案: 回答缺乏连贯性和具体内容，建议学习如何用连贯的句子表达观点，并提供具体理由或例子。注意语法和词汇的正确使用。

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel comfortable and relaxed. My favorite music is rock, which is very energetic and exciting.

× I like to say because I found it good way to relax myself.

✓ I like singing because I found it a good way to relax myself.

动词后面应该用动名词形式表示喜欢做某事，'like to say'应改为'like singing'。

× I often say by faithful songs along at home.

✓ I often sing faithful songs alone at home.

介词使用错误，'say by'应改为'sing'，'along'应为'alone'表示独自。

× With OIA, I'm not good at it.

✓ With OIA, I'm not good at it.

此句中'OIA'不明确，可能是拼写错误，建议确认词汇。此处不做语法修改。

× Saying just hard when we felt comfortable and more happier.

✓ Singing is just hard when we feel comfortable and happier.

动词形式错误，'Saying'应为'Singing'，且句子结构需调整，'felt'应为'feel'保持时态一致。

× No, I've never known how to save songs.

✓ No, I've never known how to sing songs.

动词错误，'save'应为'sing'，且时态使用现在完成时正确。

× Like same songs or plain pillow but I didn't continue because I'm not.

✓ Like some songs or plain pillow but I didn't continue because I wasn't interested.

代词使用错误，'same'应为'some'，句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× Interested. Hyper for al hobbies like.

✓ Interested. I prefer all hobbies like sports.

形容词使用错误，'Hyper'不合适，且句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× Especially spots.

✓ Especially sports.

拼写错误，'spots'应为'sports'。

× Hello. Nobody, I'm afraid.

✓ Hello. Nobody, I'm afraid.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× Because I am not good at saying songs an if I know.

✓ Because I am not good at singing songs and if I do know.

代词和动词形式错误，'saying'应为'singing'，'an'应为'and'，句子不完整，补充完整。

× Actually I I prefer to write something for.

✓ Actually, I prefer to write something for someone.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，补充完整表达。

× For somebody. By not saying.

✓ For somebody, not by singing.

表达不完整，调整语序使句子通顺。

× Yes, I think saying.

✓ Yes, I think singing.

动词形式错误，'saying'应为'singing'。

× Is a good way to. Felt comfortable and her pair.

✓ Is a good way to feel comfortable and happier.

动词时态错误，'felt'应为'feel'，'her pair'应为'happier'。

× My favorite? Music is rock.

✓ My favorite music is rock.

句子结构不完整，补充完整表达。

× Rock songs, yeah. Is very. Crazy.

✓ Rock songs, yeah. They are very crazy.

缺少主语，'Is'应为'They are'，使句子完整。