Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免拼写错误，并且回答时要简洁明了，避免重复和不连贯。可以先用一句话直接回答问题，再用一两句具体说明原因。

例: Yes, I like singing because it is a great way to express my emotions and relieve stress. However, I usually sing alone since I feel shy and not confident to perform in front of others.

提案: 回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持。避免使用错误的词汇和结构。

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I prefer listening to music because I am not confident in my singing skills. Instead, I like to spend my free time painting.

提案: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，建议先明确回答问题，再用具体例子支持。注意句子结构和词汇的正确使用。

例: I like to sing for my friends and neighbors because they enjoy it. I feel comfortable singing in front of them, especially during our evening gatherings.

提案: 回答中有拼写和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，避免拼写错误，并用具体例子说明观点。

例: Yes, singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions and reduce stress. For example, many people enjoy singing in the shower or in the car to feel better.

× Yes, I really enjoyed seeing Becaused it is fantastic way to express emotions and release stress.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because it is a fantastic way to express emotions and release stress.

这里使用了过去时态'enjoyed'，但句子表达的是一般事实或习惯，应使用一般现在时'enjoy'。另外，'seeing'应为'singing'，且'Becaused'拼写错误，应为'because'。

× I perform sing alone because I'm not very confident in messing abilities.

✓ I perform singing alone because I'm not very confident in my singing abilities.

'perform sing'搭配不当，应使用动名词形式'singing'。'messing abilities'拼写错误，应为'singing abilities'。

× I will embarrassed when he was saying in front of other people.

✓ I will be embarrassed when I sing in front of other people.

'will embarrassed'缺少助动词be，应为'will be embarrassed'。'he was saying'应为'I sing'，因为主语是自己，且时态应与将来时一致。

× No, I'll ever taken for most sane essence.

✓ No, I've never taken any singing lessons.

'I'll ever taken'时态和结构错误，应为现在完成时'I've never taken'。'most sane essence'无意义，推测为'singing lessons'。

× I prefer listening to music rather than saying.

✓ I prefer listening to music rather than singing.

'saying'用词错误，应为'singing'，表示唱歌。

× Instead I prefer focusing on painting or something else in my free time.

✓ Instead, I prefer focusing on painting or something else in my free time.

句首缺少逗号，'Instead'作为副词应与后文用逗号隔开。

× I like sing for my friends and neighbors because they enjoy each and a nice thing in front of them.

✓ I like to sing for my friends and neighbors because they enjoy it and it's a nice thing to do in front of them.

'like sing'应为'like to sing'或'like singing'。'each and a nice thing'表达不清，应改为'they enjoy it and it's a nice thing'。

× We have color case at night sometimes.

✓ We have karaoke sessions at night sometimes.

'color case'拼写错误，应为'karaoke'。

× Many people like seeing in the shower, ward or car to feel better.

✓ Many people like singing in the shower, ward, or car to feel better.

'seeing'应为'singing'。

× Color OK is fantastic activity to bring joy.

✓ Karaoke is a fantastic activity to bring joy.

'Color OK'拼写错误，应为'Karaoke'。缺少冠词'a'，应为'a fantastic activity'。