Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không chính xác hoặc không liên quan như "my cup of tea analyzing it". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do một cách đơn giản và dễ hiểu, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và ngữ pháp đúng.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a hard working day. It allows me to immerse myself in the music and forget about stress.

提案: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn. Tránh các câu không hoàn chỉnh và thiếu ý nghĩa. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích nếu bạn đã học hay chưa, và nếu có, hãy nói thêm về ai đã truyền cảm hứng cho bạn.

例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, but my father, who loves singing, has inspired me a lot.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng và không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên nói rõ bạn muốn hát cho ai và mục đích của việc hát đó, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I want to sing for all my beloved ones to share my happiness and inspire them to enjoy their lives more.

提案: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn. Tránh các câu không hoàn chỉnh và không rõ nghĩa. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do tại sao hát có thể mang lại hạnh phúc cho mọi người.

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it inspires people and helps them express their emotions, especially after a long working day.

× Yes, after we actually because my cup of tea analyzing it because it helped me to immerse myself too little to help me to relax after a hard working day.

✓ Yes, actually, singing is my cup of tea because it helps me immerse myself and relax after a hard working day.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure, making it difficult to understand. The correction combines ideas into a coherent sentence with proper conjunctions and verb forms.

× No, I will.

✓ No, I haven't.

The response to 'Have you ever learnt how to sing?' requires a past participle form with 'have' to indicate experience. 'I will' is incorrect here as it indicates future intention, not past experience.

× I have learned how to sing by my father's for her passion on singing and.

✓ I have learned how to sing from my father because of his passion for singing.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'By my father's for her passion' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the source and reason for learning.

× I think. Inspiring the.

✓ I think he is inspiring.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. The correction completes the thought with a proper subject and verb.

× I want to sing for every for all my beloved ones, and then I want to. My happiness to inspire the lovely of freedom to them and make them make their life more.

✓ I want to sing for all my beloved ones, and I want to share my happiness to inspire their love of freedom and make their lives better.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness, ensuring proper verb forms and object usage.

× Actually. That's true. Because the singing have no people to inspire.

✓ Actually, that's true because singing has the power to inspire people.

'Singing have' is incorrect; 'singing' as a singular noun requires 'has'. The correction also improves sentence flow and clarity.

× Do inspire and their emotion too. After working day.

✓ It inspires people and their emotions too after a working day.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb agreement. The correction provides a complete sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and prepositions.