Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, and avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases. Use simple, correct sentences and explain why you like singing with specific reasons.

例: Yes, I like singing in my free time because it helps me relax and improve my mood, especially when I feel sad.

提案: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Give a direct and clear response, and avoid unnecessary phrases like 'according to my opinion'. Use simple past tense correctly and keep your answer natural and effective.

例: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to answer directly who you want to sing for, and explain your reason clearly. Use simple sentences and correct grammar to make your answer natural and effective.

例: I usually sing for myself to feel relaxed and calm, although some friends have told me they enjoy my singing.

提案: Your answer is partially understandable but contains unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons using linking words. Keep your sentences coherent and relevant.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax, feel calm, and enjoy the moment.

× I like singing in my free time.

✓ I like to sing in my free time.

The verb 'like' can be followed by either the gerund (-ing form) or the infinitive (to + verb). However, in this context, 'I like to sing' is more appropriate to express a habitual action. Using 'to sing' is clearer and more formal in this case.

× Usually I sing the songs when I'm sad.

✓ Usually I sing songs when I'm sad.

The definite article 'the' is not needed before 'songs' here because the speaker is talking about songs in general, not specific songs. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I sing this song and Ben and didn't shower us in this phone for my good mood and feeling relax and chill.

✓ I sing this song and Ben's song on this phone to improve my mood and feel relaxed and chill.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Didn't shower us in this phone' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or misstatement. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by restructuring the sentence and using appropriate verbs and phrases.

× No, I'm never ever learned how to sing or soon, according to my opinion, according to my mind.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, in my opinion.

The present perfect tense 'have never learned' is appropriate to express an experience up to now. 'I'm never ever learned' is incorrect because 'am' should not be used with 'learned' in this way. Also, 'according to my opinion' is redundant; 'in my opinion' is the correct phrase.

× I don't want to sing for anyone who sing for myself, for my own mood photo feel relaxed and calm.

✓ I don't want to sing for anyone; I sing for myself, to feel relaxed and calm.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing. 'Who sing for myself' is incorrect; 'I sing for myself' is correct. Also, 'photo' seems out of place and is removed for clarity.

× And I've been told likes when I sing a song, but I didn't song.

✓ And I've been told people like it when I sing a song, but I haven't sung for anyone.

The phrase 'didn't song' is incorrect; the past participle 'sung' should be used with 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'likes' should be 'people like it' for clarity.

× Yes, I believe singing and bring happiness to people too.

✓ Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people too.

The verb 'bring' should be in the third person singular present tense 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'.

× And do they move a purple? Something said.

✓ And does it move a person? Something is said.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It seems to be a misstatement. The correction attempts to make a meaningful sentence, but the original meaning is ambiguous.

× It helps. To relax the mind and feel calm and enjoy the moment.

✓ It helps to relax the mind, feel calm, and enjoy the moment.

The sentence fragments should be combined into one sentence for clarity and correctness. The infinitive 'to relax' should be followed by parallel verbs without 'to'.