Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法错误较多，且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态一致性，避免语法错误，并且回答时保持句子简洁，避免多余的词汇。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me happy and helps me relax when I feel stressed.

提案: 回答中存在严重语法错误和表达不清，且内容不完整。建议学习正确的时态用法，注意句子结构完整，避免断句和拼写错误。

例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a child, but I only took a few classes and did not continue learning.

提案: 回答表达不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

例: I would like to sing for myself because I am a bit shy and afraid to sing in front of others.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，语法和词汇错误较多。建议加强词汇量，注意句子结构，确保表达完整且有逻辑。

例: Of course, singing is beautiful and can make people feel happy and relaxed.

× Yes I do, because singing makes me happy and makes me feel relaxed when? I was stressed.

✓ Yes, I do, because singing makes me happy and makes me feel relaxed when I was stressed.

句中“when?”中的问号使用错误，应去掉。句子描述过去的状态，使用过去时“was”正确。建议去掉问号，使句子通顺。

× Yes, I have learn how to say when I was.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing when I was a child.

“have learn”应为现在完成时，动词应使用过去分词“learned”。“say”应为“sing”，符合语境。句子不完整，补充“a child”使句意完整。

× A child, but it was just several classes in I didn't. Insist on learning Cini.

✓ I was a child, but I only took several classes and didn't insist on learning singing.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且“Cini”应为“singing”。重组句子，使其语法正确且表达清晰。

× Well, I would like to sing for myself because I was a little bit shy and I was afraid of saying to others in public.

✓ Well, I would like to sing for myself because I am a little bit shy and I am afraid of singing to others in public.

描述现在的性格和感受，应使用现在时“am”和“am afraid”。“saying”应改为“singing”，符合语境。

× Of course, because seeing is beautiful.

✓ Of course, because singing is beautiful.

“seeing”应为“singing”，原词为“看”，与语境不符。

× Lyrical scan because feel happy and relaxed.

✓ Lyrical singing makes people feel happy and relaxed.

原句缺少主语和谓语，且“scan”应为“singing”。重组句子，使其语法正确且表达清晰。