Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt không rõ ràng, đồng thời sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, dễ hiểu. Hãy tập trung vào việc trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a long day. When I sing, I feel calm and comfortable, which makes me happy.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại thông tin và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

例: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally. I usually sing at home for fun because it makes me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm chính xác hơn, đồng thời tránh lỗi sai từ vựng. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I want to sing for myself, my parents, and my friends because I feel comfortable and confident when I sing for them.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý kiến rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel relaxed and enjoy the moment. Many people find comfort in music and singing.

× Oh yes, I love singing because it has me relax after a long day an I can immerse myself in the middle day of the strong I feel is very relaxed and comfortable.

✓ Oh yes, I love singing because it helps me relax after a long day and I can immerse myself in the middle of the song; I feel very relaxed and comfortable.

The phrase 'has me relax' is incorrect; the correct form is 'helps me relax' to express assistance. Also, 'an' should be 'and'. 'Middle day of the strong' is likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'middle of the song'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Uh, no, I haven't learned how to sing. I just saying OK, OK at home.

✓ Uh, no, I haven't learned how to sing. I just sing OK, OK at home.

The phrase 'I just saying' is incorrect because 'saying' is a present participle and does not fit here. The correct verb form is 'sing' to indicate the action. This correction aligns with proper verb usage in the present tense.

× Because I think it's happy, relaxed, and I feel all comfortable when I'm saying so.

✓ Because I think it makes me happy, relaxed, and I feel comfortable when I'm singing.

The phrase 'it's happy' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes me happy' to express cause and effect. Also, 'all comfortable' is awkward; 'comfortable' suffices. 'Saying' should be 'singing' to match the context. This correction improves meaning and grammatical correctness.

× Oh I want to sing for me, my parents and my friend because I'm so feel comfortable when I sync for them and I'm very confident when I sing for them in.

✓ Oh, I want to sing for myself, my parents, and my friends because I feel comfortable when I sing for them and I'm very confident when I sing for them.

The pronoun 'me' should be reflexive 'myself' when the subject and object are the same. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. 'Sync' is a typo and should be 'sing'. The phrase 'I'm so feel comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel comfortable'. The ending 'in' is unnecessary and removed. These corrections fix pronoun use, verb form, and clarity.

× Oh yes, I think singing camp bring hapiness for people because I went singing.

✓ Oh yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because I went singing.

The modal verb 'camp' is a typo and should be 'can' to express ability or possibility. 'Hapiness' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'happiness'. 'For people' should be 'to people' to use the correct preposition. These corrections improve meaning and grammatical accuracy.

× I think it helps them feel more comfortable and really trust it. 1/2 people can improve my invite themselves in the melody of Rashan and they say.

✓ I think it helps them feel more comfortable and really trust it. Many people can immerse themselves in the melody of the song and they say so.

The phrase 'really trust it' is unclear; it might mean 'really enjoy it' or 'really feel it'. '1/2 people' is unclear and likely a mishearing; replaced with 'Many people'. 'Improve my invite themselves' is incorrect; corrected to 'immerse themselves'. 'Melody of Rashan' is likely 'melody of the song'. These corrections fix sentence structure and clarity.