Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りがあります。理由を明確にし、簡潔で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

例: Yes, I like singing because it makes me and others feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 質問に直接答えていません。質問に対して明確に答え、関連のある内容を述べるようにしましょう。

例: No, I haven't taken any singing lessons, but I would like to learn in the future to improve my skills.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的にも不自然です。誰のために歌いたいかを明確にし、理由を具体的に述べましょう。

例: I want to sing for my family because they have always supported me and made me feel loved.

提案: 回答が短く、内容が不十分です。理由や具体例を加えて、より詳しく説明しましょう。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people express their emotions and connect with others.

× I like singing becauses my voice can make people happy. Easier.

✓ I like singing because my voice can make people happy. It's easier.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, 'Easier.' is a fragment and should be connected properly, e.g., 'It's easier.' to form a complete sentence.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

The verb 'learnt' is a past tense form used mainly in British English; 'learned' is the preferred past participle in American English. Both are acceptable, but consistency is important. Here, 'learned' fits better with the present perfect tense.

× No, I haven't, but I want to visit you someday.

✓ No, I haven't, but I want to learn someday.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect in this context because the student likely means to say they want to learn singing someday, not visit the examiner. The sentence should reflect the intended meaning.

× OK. I want to sing for you, my family, because my family raised me. Very nice guy.

✓ OK. I want to sing for you and my family because my family raised me. They are very nice people.

The sentence 'Very nice guy.' is a fragment and unclear. It should be connected properly and clarified. Also, 'you, my family,' is awkward; 'you and my family' is clearer.

× Yes, of course. Many things. Help people live together.

✓ Yes, of course. Singing can do many things. It helps people live together.

The sentences 'Many things.' and 'Help people live together.' are fragments and lack subjects and verbs. They should be combined into complete sentences for clarity.