Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác như "seeing" thay vì "singing", "joy board" thay vì "joyful" hoặc "joyous", và câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm chính xác và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I love singing because it is a quick way to express my emotions. Singing with friends is really joyful and helps me feel more relaxed. Moreover, singing boosts my confidence and improves my mood.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng như "her professional teacher" không rõ nghĩa và "basics techniques" nên là "basic techniques". Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng đúng ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Actually, no, I have never learned how to sing professionally because I couldn't afford to take lessons with a professional teacher. However, I'm currently working on improving my singing skills by watching tutorial videos on YouTube, which help me learn some basic techniques.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "preferred to Sanchez from myself" và câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả hơn.

例: Because my singing ability is limited, I usually prefer to sing by myself to reduce stress and relax after a long and tiring day at work. I especially enjoy singing in the bathroom because the acoustics make my voice sound better, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "sing ink", "press the emotion". Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, not only for me. I think many people feel happier when they sing because singing is a wonderful way to express real emotions. For example, when you are sad, singing a sad song can help you feel better.

× Yes, I love seeing because it is a quick way to express my emotions.

✓ Yes, I love singing because it is a quick way to express my emotions.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form of the verb, which is 'singing' not 'seeing'. 'Seeing' is a different verb and changes the meaning of the sentence.

× Singing with friends is really joy board and help me feel more realized.

✓ Singing with friends is really joyful and helps me feel more relaxed.

The adjective 'joy board' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'joyful'. Also, the verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'Singing with friends'. 'Realized' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'relaxed'.

× Moreover, singing helps me boost my confidence and also improve my mood.

✓ Moreover, singing helps me boost my confidence and also improves my mood.

The verb 'improve' should be in third person singular form 'improves' to agree with the singular subject 'singing'.

× Actually, no, I have never learned how to sing professionally because I couldn't afford to take lessons with her professional teacher.

✓ Actually, no, I have never learned how to sing professionally because I couldn't afford to take lessons with a professional teacher.

The phrase 'her professional teacher' is incorrect unless referring to a specific female teacher previously mentioned. It should be 'a professional teacher' to indicate any teacher.

× However, I'm currently working on improving my singing skills by watching tutorial videos on YouTube which help me learn some basics techniques.

✓ However, I'm currently working on improving my singing skills by watching tutorial videos on YouTube which help me learn some basic techniques.

The word 'basics' should be the adjective 'basic' to correctly modify 'techniques'. Also, 'help' is correct here because it refers to 'videos' (plural).

× Because my singing ability is limited, I usually preferred to Sanchez from myself to reduce drafts and relax after a long and tiring day at work.

✓ Because my singing ability is limited, I usually prefer to sing by myself to reduce stress and relax after a long and tiring day at work.

The verb 'preferred' is past tense but the sentence context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'prefer' is correct. 'Sanchez' is incorrect; the intended word is 'sing'. 'Drafts' is incorrect; the intended word is 'stress'. 'From myself' should be 'by myself'.

× I especially enjoy singing in the bathroom because the acoustic make my voice gets a better which make their appearance more enjoy.

✓ I especially enjoy singing in the bathroom because the acoustics make my voice sound better, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

'Acoustic' should be plural 'acoustics'. 'Make my voice gets a better' is incorrect; it should be 'make my voice sound better'. 'Make their appearance more enjoy' is incorrect; it should be 'makes the experience more enjoyable'.

× Yes, not just me. I think many people think that sing ink and have people are more happier because singing is a wonderful way to press the emotion, the real emotion when you set you can think symbol it song, for example.

✓ Yes, not just me. I think many people believe that singing makes people happier because singing is a wonderful way to express emotions, the real emotions. When you sing, you can symbolize your feelings in a song, for example.

The original sentence contains many errors: 'sing ink' should be 'singing'; 'have people are more happier' is incorrect and should be 'makes people happier'; 'press the emotion' should be 'express emotions'; 'when you set you can think symbol it song' is unclear and corrected to 'when you sing, you can symbolize your feelings in a song'. Also, 'more happier' is redundant; 'happier' alone is correct.