Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: Yes, I like singing because I have a strong interest in music. When I was a student, I often sang while doing my homework to relax. Singing helps me express my emotions and enjoy my free time.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và tránh lặp từ. Thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing because I usually focus on my studies. Therefore, I haven't spent much time taking singing lessons.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về người bạn muốn hát cho và lý do.

例: I want to sing for my favorite singer because he is my idol and role model. I am a big fan and hope to have the chance to sing with him someday.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I feel unhappy, I often listen to music which helps me relax and improve my mood.

× Yes, of course it because they need have made a real has an interest interest in music.

✓ Yes, of course, it is because they need to have a real interest in music.

The original sentence has multiple structural issues including missing verbs and incorrect word order. The phrase 'need have made a real has an interest interest' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'need to have a real interest' which is grammatically correct and clear.

× When I when I am a student, I'm in the middle of doing homework, so I often I often think music too.

✓ When I was a student, I was often in the middle of doing homework, so I often listened to music too.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly and repeats phrases unnecessarily. Since the context is past, 'was' and 'listened' are appropriate. Also, 'think music' is incorrect; it should be 'listened to music'.

× I have my.

✓ I have my own music.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'own music' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× No, I don't know, I said.

✓ No, I don't know how to sing.

The original sentence is unclear and uses 'I said' unnecessarily. The correction clarifies the meaning by stating the inability to sing.

× And learn how to sing in how to sync because I'm the I'm in the middle of doing homework, doing homework.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing because I am often in the middle of doing homework.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct explanation.

× So I don't I so I don't spend a lot of time to spend a lot of time and learning how to sing so.

✓ So I don't spend a lot of time learning how to sing.

The phrase 'to spend a lot of time and learning' is incorrect. The correct form is 'spend a lot of time learning' without 'to' before 'spend' and without 'and'.

× I have many of people who want to sing for but I want to see if for some 20P and because he's my idol with a model with me.

✓ I have many people I want to sing for, but I want to sing for someone special because he is my idol and role model.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrases like 'some 20P' and 'with a model with me'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun usage.

× So I'm very I'm a big fan up sometimes be so I I always I always hope I get I could I could sing with other with him.

✓ So I am a big fan, and I always hope I could sing with him someday.

The original sentence is repetitive and confusing. The correction simplifies and clarifies the intended meaning.

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness and to people and take me take me as an example, I often listen music when I am when I send an unhappy music.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Take me as an example, I often listen to music when I am unhappy.

The phrase 'bring happiness and to people' is incorrect; it should be 'bring happiness to people'. Also, 'listen music' should be 'listen to music'. The phrase 'when I send an unhappy music' is unclear and corrected to 'when I am unhappy'.

× I listen music help me relax and.

✓ Listening to music helps me relax.

The original sentence lacks proper verb form and preposition. 'Listen music' should be 'listen to music', and the sentence needs to be completed properly. The correction uses the gerund form 'Listening' and correct verb agreement.