Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但存在发音错误（"saying"应为"singing"），且句子结构较简单，缺少连接词使表达不够流畅。建议注意发音准确性，并使用连接词如"because"或"so"来增强句子连贯性。

例: Yes, I like singing because it is very relaxing and helps me relieve stress after a busy day.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误（"saving"应为"singing"），语法错误（"counts"应为"count"），且句子较长且结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，注意动词形式，并使用连接词使表达更清晰。

例: Actually, I haven't learned how to sing properly, except for some basic singing classes I took in primary school, but I don't think that really counts as formal singing.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和拼写错误（"his"应为"is"，"seem"应为"sing"，"to relieving"应为"to relieve"），且表达不清晰。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致和动词形式，避免重复词汇，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I only want to sing for myself because I sing to relax and relieve the stress I get from studying and working.

提案: 回答中存在多处拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"，"concepts"应为"concerts"），句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意拼写和语法，提供具体例子并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. For example, when I go to concerts, I notice that everyone feels much happier and more relaxed because of the music.

× Yes, I like saying because I find it very relaxing.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I find it very relaxing.

动词 'like' 后面应该接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里 'saying' 应改为 'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌。

× Actually, I haven't learned how to sing properly except for some basic saving classes I took in primary school, but I don't think that's really counts as former singing.

✓ Actually, I haven't learned how to sing properly except for some basic singing classes I took in primary school, but I don't think that really counts as formal singing.

'saving' 是拼写错误，应为 'singing'。'counts' 前面有否定结构 'don't think'，动词应用原形 'count'。'former' 应为 'formal'，表示正规的。

× The only person I want to sing for his myself because I only seem for relaxing and to relieving those stress I. Get get get from learning and working.

✓ The only person I want to sing for is myself because I only sing for relaxing and to relieve the stress I get from learning and working.

'his' 用错，应为 'is' 连接主语和表语。'seem' 应为 'sing'，符合语境。'to relieving' 应为 'to relieve'，不定式后用动词原形。'those stress' 应为 'the stress'，不可数名词用定冠词。句中多余的 'get get get' 应删去。

× Yes, I do believe seeing can definitely help bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I do believe singing can definitely help bring happiness to people.

'seeing' 是拼写错误，应为 'singing'，符合上下文语境。

× For example, when I go to concepts, I notice that everyone feels much more happy and relaxed because the thing in.

✓ For example, when I go to concerts, I notice that everyone feels much happier and more relaxed because of the singing.

'concepts' 应为 'concerts'，表示音乐会。'much more happy' 应为 'much happier'，比较级形式。'the thing in' 语义不明，改为 'because of the singing' 表示原因。