Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons. Use simple and correct sentences, and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I especially enjoy singing Punjabi songs as they make me feel confident and happy.

提案: Your answer is too short and unclear. Provide a complete sentence with correct grammar and add some details about when or how you learnt singing.

例: Yes, I learnt how to sing during my school days when I joined the music club to improve my skills.

提案: Your answer does not address the question. You should give a clear response specifying who you want to sing for and why, with supporting details.

例: I want to sing for my family and friends because I enjoy sharing my passion and making them happy.

提案: Your answer is too brief. Provide a full sentence and explain why you think singing can bring happiness, with examples or reasons.

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it uplifts people's mood and helps them express their feelings.

× Definitely I like singing eyes saying different type of long.

✓ Definitely, I like singing songs of different types.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect word usage ('eyes saying different type of long'). The correction clarifies the meaning by replacing it with 'songs of different types' and adding a comma after 'Definitely' for better sentence structure.

× Mostly I prefer to sync Punjabi song.

✓ Mostly, I prefer to sing Punjabi songs.

The verb 'sync' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'sing'. Also, 'Punjabi song' should be plural 'Punjabi songs' to indicate variety. A comma after 'Mostly' improves readability.

× Whenever I sing Punjabi song I feel comfort table or confident wise thinking that songs.

✓ Whenever I sing Punjabi songs, I feel comfortable and confident while thinking about those songs.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'comfort table' should be 'comfortable', 'confident wise thinking that songs' is unclear and incorrect. The correction uses proper adjectives and clarifies the meaning with correct phrasing and punctuation.

× Yes, any school days I preferred to learn.

✓ Yes, during my school days, I preferred to learn singing.

The phrase 'any school days' is incorrect; 'during my school days' is appropriate. Also, 'preferred to learn' needs an object; adding 'singing' clarifies the meaning. The past tense 'preferred' is correct here.

× Who do you want to sing for? Student: Yes.

✓ Who do you want to sing for? Student: I want to sing for my family and friends.

The student's answer 'Yes' does not answer the question. A proper response should specify the people they want to sing for. This correction provides a suitable answer.