Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để truyền đạt ý tưởng một cách hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and reduces my stress after a long day.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn bị lặp lại và có lỗi ngữ pháp, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

例: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I just enjoy listening to my favorite songs.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và thiếu cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I would like to sing for my mom because she always supports me and I want to make her happy.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến của mình.

例: Yes, definitely. I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and reduce stress after a busy day.

× Yes, I like singing because when I was singing I feel very relaxed.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I am singing I feel very relaxed.

The verb tense is inconsistent; 'was singing' is past continuous, but 'feel' is present tense. To express a general truth, use present continuous 'am singing' with present tense 'feel'.

× Envy is redeem, stressed.

✓ Envy is redeemed, stressed.

The sentence is unclear and likely contains incorrect word usage. 'Redeem' is a verb; 'redeemed' is past participle adjective form. However, the phrase is unclear; possibly intended 'envy is redeemed' or 'envy is removed when stressed'. Suggest rephrasing for clarity.

× No, I have. No, I have. Now I haven't learn how to sing, I just listing my favorite song.

✓ No, I haven't. Now I haven't learned how to sing, I just listen to my favorite songs.

Incorrect use of present perfect and base verb forms. 'Have' needs auxiliary verb 'have' + past participle 'learned'. 'Listing' should be 'listening' (verb form). Also, 'songs' plural is appropriate.

× But I never learn how to sing it.

✓ But I have never learned how to sing it.

Present perfect tense requires 'have' + past participle 'learned'. 'Learn' is base form, incorrect here.

× Graph Aiting. I just like I really want to sing for my. Mom, because this is.

✓ I just really want to sing for my mom because she is important to me.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words ('Graph Aiting'). Pronoun 'my' should be followed by a noun 'mom'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× Yes, I yes, definitely yes. I think singing can't bring happiness to people because.

✓ Yes, definitely yes. I think singing can bring happiness to people because...

The modal verb 'can't' contradicts the intended positive meaning. 'Can' is appropriate to express ability or possibility.

× It is the best though good quiet to reduce. Strep and happy people realized after one day of work.

✓ It is the best and good way to reduce stress, and people feel happy after a day of work.

The sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words ('though good quiet', 'Strep'). Correct sentence structure and word choice improve clarity.