Singing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有较多语法和表达错误，影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免重复和不完整的句子。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and feel happy. When I'm in a good mood, I often sing cheerful songs even though I'm not a professional singer.

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，信息表达不清晰。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并用完整句子描述朋友学唱歌的经历，注意时态和单复数。

例: I have never learned how to sing, but one of my friends took singing lessons. The classes taught her proper techniques and helped her improve her singing skills.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，影响理解。建议用完整句子表达自己喜欢为自己唱歌的原因，并说明具体时间和感受，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I usually sing for myself because it helps me relax and feel peaceful. I like to sing alone, whether it's at night or early in the morning.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，句子不完整且有拼写错误。建议用完整句子表达观点，说明为什么唱歌能带来快乐，并举例说明不同类型的音乐如何影响人们的情绪。

例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Many people enjoy music, such as happy and pop songs, because they can lift their mood and make them feel joyful.

× I do like seeing, especially when I'm in good mood, I would sing happy songs.

✓ I do like singing, especially when I'm in a good mood, I would sing happy songs.

动词后面接动名词形式表示喜欢做某事，seeing应改为singing；同时，表达心情时应加冠词a，good mood前应加a。

× especially when I'm in good mood, I would sing happy songs.

✓ especially when I'm in a good mood, I would sing happy songs.

good mood前缺少冠词a，正确表达为in a good mood。

× I don't have beautiful voice, I still like to make some music when.

✓ I don't have a beautiful voice, I still like to make some music.

voice是可数名词，前面应加不定冠词a；句尾when后无内容，应删除。

× I still like to make some music when.

✓ I still like to make some music.

句子末尾的when没有后续内容，导致句子结构不完整，应删除。

× Never for my but one of my friend she used to learn how to sing.

✓ Never for me, but one of my friends used to learn how to sing.

句子结构混乱，主语和宾语不明确，my friend应为my friends，且去掉多余的she。

× one of my friend

✓ one of my friends

one of后面应接复数名词，friend应改为friends。

× She took a thing class and it.

✓ She took a singing class.

thing class表达不正确，应为singing class；句子末尾的and it无意义，应删除。

× Taught her how to sing properly and.

✓ It taught her how to sing properly.

缺少主语it，且句尾and无后续内容，应删除。

× It helped her to improve her sings cues.

✓ It helped her to improve her singing skills.

sings cues不正确，应为singing skills，表示唱歌技巧。

× Rarely have.

✓ Rarely have I seen that.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整句子。

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

此句无语法错误，符合口语习惯。

× Because Sing Rally makes me relaxing and feel peaceful, so I like to sing for myself when I'm alone no matter at night all.

✓ Because singing really makes me relaxed and feel peaceful, so I like to sing for myself when I'm alone, no matter at night or all day.

Sing Rally应为singing really；makes me relaxing应为makes me relaxed；句子末尾表达不完整，需补充。

× Sing Rally makes me relaxing and feel peaceful

✓ Singing really makes me relaxed and feel peaceful

副词really应放在动词makes前；relaxing是现在分词，表达感受时应用形容词relaxed。

× no matter at night all.

✓ no matter if it's at night or during the day.

表达不完整，no matter后应接完整的时间状语。

× The first thing the morning it interesting. It's in.

✓ The first thing in the morning is interesting.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语is，且多余的it interesting和It's in应删除。

× I do believe saying could bring happiness to people.

✓ I do believe singing could bring happiness to people.

saying是动名词，意思是“说话”，应为singing“唱歌”。

× That's why there are so many people fall in love with music.

✓ That's why so many people fall in love with music.

there are后面不应直接接动词fall，去掉there are更通顺。

× So happy and pop music.

✓ So happy and pop music are popular.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词。

× Cherubs people app.

✓ Cheer up people a lot.

原句无意义，推测意为“给人们带来快乐”，应改为Cheer up people a lot。