Ejemplo de banda 7
Tema: Describe a bad service you received in a restaurant/shop
Ejemplo
Recently, when I was out having dinner with my colleagues, I met a really rude waitress. It happened a few months ago when my entire team was out celebrating the fact that we had hit our targets for the quarter. It was a big deal, and the company founder came along too. We were so happy and relieved to be out together celebrating after months of hard work. However, once the waitress came in to take our orders, it was clear that she had a really bad attitude. She seemed unhappy to be serving such a large group and mixed up our orders. When the wrong food came, she refused to fix the problem. In the end, the company founder had to go and find the manager himself and explain the situation, and we got a different waitress. At the time, we were all really upset and annoyed that the incident had ruined our big night out. However, I think it was particularly upsetting for the founder of the company, as he places great emphasis on good customer service within his own team. He always insists that all staff, no matter what business function they work in, attend regular training on customer service. This is to ensure that we treat our customers with respect at all times, even when their expectations might seem unrealistic or they are dissatisfied with our service. Although people don't often break this rule, I have heard of a few incidents where customers have complained about poor service. When this happens, the founder of the company gets personally involved and makes a big effort to smooth things over. The incident in the restaurant really reinforced the importance of courtesy and good customer service to me, and I don't think I'll ever forget it.
Recientemente, cuando estaba cenando con mis colegas, conocí a una camarera muy grosera. Sucedió hace unos meses cuando todo mi equipo salió a celebrar el hecho de haber alcanzado nuestros objetivos del trimestre. Fue un gran logro, y el fundador de la empresa también nos acompañó. Estábamos tan felices y aliviados de estar juntos celebrando después de meses de duro trabajo. Sin embargo, una vez que la camarera vino a tomar nuestros pedidos, estaba claro que tenía una actitud realmente mala. Parecía infeliz de estar sirviendo a un grupo tan grande y mezcló nuestros pedidos. Cuando llegó la comida incorrecta, se negó a arreglar el problema. Al final, el fundador de la empresa tuvo que ir a buscar al gerente y explicar la situación, y conseguimos a otra camarera. En ese momento, todos estábamos muy molestos y molestos porque el incidente había arruinado nuestra gran salida nocturna. Sin embargo, creo que fue particularmente angustiante para el fundador de la empresa, ya que pone gran énfasis en el buen servicio al cliente dentro de su propio equipo. Siempre insiste en que todo el personal, sin importar en qué función de negocios trabajen, asista a capacitaciones regulares sobre servicio al cliente. Esto es para asegurarse de que tratamos a nuestros clientes con respeto en todo momento, incluso cuando sus expectativas puedan parecer poco realistas o estén insatisfechos con nuestro servicio. Aunque las personas no suelen romper esta regla, he escuchado de algunos incidentes donde los clientes se han quejado de mal servicio. Cuando esto sucede, el fundador de la empresa se involucra personalmente y hace un gran esfuerzo para solucionar las cosas. El incidente en el restaurante realmente reforzó la importancia de la cortesía y un buen servicio al cliente para mí, y no creo que lo olvidaré nunca.
Vocabulario
  • rude waitress
    mesera grosera
  • celebrating the fact that we had hit our targets
    celebrando el hecho de que habíamos alcanzado nuestros objetivos
  • a big deal
    un gran problema
  • mixed up our orders
    Nos confundieron los pedidos.
  • refused to fix the problem
    se negó a arreglar el problema
  • ruin our big night out
    arruinar nuestra gran noche fuera
  • the company founder
    el fundador de la empresa
  • great emphasis on good customer service
    gran énfasis en un buen servicio al cliente
  • regular training on customer service
    entrenamiento regular en servicio al cliente
  • treat our customers with respect at all times
    tratar a nuestros clientes con respeto en todo momento
  • smooth things over
    arreglar las cosas
  • reinforced the importance of courtesy
    reforzó la importancia de la cortesía
Ejemplo
A couple of months ago, I had an unfortunate dining experience at a highly-rated Italian restaurant downtown. My friends and I were looking forward to a pleasant evening, but things took a nosedive as soon as we arrived. First, the hostess seemed disinterested and barely greeted us. It was as if we were an afterthought. Then came the long wait. Despite having made reservations, we were left standing awkwardly near the entrance for almost 30 minutes. When we were finally seated, the waiter was inattentive, often disappearing for long stretches, which further soured the atmosphere. The pinnacle of poor service, however, came when our food arrived cold, and my pasta dish was undercooked. We decided to address the situation head-on and spoke with the manager. He seemed genuinely concerned and immediately took steps to remedy the issue. He offered to replace our meals and took a percentage off our bill as a goodwill gesture. While this did mitigate the damage to some extent, it couldn't entirely erase the tarnish from the experience. In retrospect, I felt disappointed and irritated. Dining out is not just about food; it's an experience, a form of social engagement. Service glitches can significantly mar the experience and leave a lasting impression. Despite the manager's efforts to make amends, the initial disappointments cast a long shadow over the evening.
Hace un par de meses, tuve una experiencia desafortunada en un restaurante italiano muy bien calificado en el centro. Mis amigos y yo esperábamos tener una noche agradable, pero las cosas se tornaron desagradables tan pronto llegamos. En retrospectiva, me sentí decepcionado e irritado. Salir a cenar no es solo sobre la comida; es una experiencia, una forma de interacción social. Los fallos en el servicio pueden estropear significativamente la experiencia y dejar una impresión duradera. A pesar de los esfuerzos del gerente por enmendar la situación, las decepciones iniciales proyectaron una larga sombra sobre la noche.
Análisis gramatical
- Combining complex and simple sentences: For example, "A pesar de haber hecho reservas, nos quedamos de pie incómodamente cerca de la entrada durante casi 30 minutos," this sentence uses "a pesar de" to introduce a concessive adverbial clause. - Proper use of tenses: The answer uses the simple past tense to describe past events, such as "Me sentí decepcionado e irritado." - Expressing a sense of hierarchy: Phrases like "sin embargo," "entonces," and "en retrospectiva" were used to express hierarchy and depth. - Logical coherence and timeline: By using "entonces," "cuando," and "a pesar de," the answer ensures coherence in time and logic. - Advanced vocabulary and accuracy: The use of "caída en picada," "manchar," and "remediar" shows advanced and accurate vocabulary.
Vocabulario
  • Nosedive
    Caída en picado
  • Disinterested
    Desinteresado
  • Afterthought
    Reflexión
  • Inattentive
    Desatento.
  • Pinnacle
    pináculo
  • Remedy
    Remedio
  • Goodwill gesture
    Gesto de buena voluntad
  • Tarnish
    Manchar
  • Retrospect
    Retrospect
  • Cast a long shadow
    Proyectar una larga sombra