Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak more clearly and use a simple, correct sentence structure: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two supporting details with correct verb forms and fewer repetitions. Use linking words (for example, but, however) and correct phrases (e.g. "window shopping" not "a window shopping"). Also correct tense and subject-verb agreement.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping when I have free time. However, I usually go window shopping rather than buying things. For example, last Sunday my friends and I went to Liberty Market and we just looked around without buying anything.

Sugerencia: Be specific and use clearer reasons with correct grammar. Start with a topic sentence answering the question, then give one clear reason and an example. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct word forms (prices, products, cheaply/cheaper).

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually compare prices when I shop because I want to save money. For instance, I check prices online and in different stores to find the cheapest option before I buy clothes or electronics.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give one clear reason with a concrete example. Use correct nouns and shorter sentences. Replace vague words with specific items and fix article and plural usage (a choice, cardigans, ethnic clothes).

Ejemplo: Yes, it is often difficult for me to decide what to buy. For example, when I see many cardigans and traditional clothes I am unsure which style or size suits me, so I take more time to choose.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion first, then one or two specific reasons and an example. Avoid hesitations and contradictions. Use comparative language correctly (more reliable, longer-lasting) and avoid repeating words. Keep it concise.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. Often cheaper items can be just as reliable, while some expensive products have design faults. For example, I bought an inexpensive blender that lasted five years, while a costly brand broke after one year.

× Yes, I like shopping sometime when I have a free time then I prefer to go to shopping, but most of the time I'm just going to a window shopping.

✓ Yes, I like shopping sometimes when I have free time, and I prefer to go shopping, but most of the time I just go window shopping.

Errors identified: incorrect adverb form 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency) [ID 20/6], article use 'a free time' should be 'free time' (article error) [ID 22], incorrect verb forms 'I'm just going to a window shopping' should be 'I just go window shopping' (verb and article issues) [ID 8/22]. Suggestions: use 'sometimes' for repeated actions, omit 'a' before uncountable 'free time', and use simple present 'I just go window shopping' for habitual actions.

× For example, last Sunday I'm you plan with my friends and I'm we are just going to the shopping for just a window shopping in Liberty Market.

✓ For example, last Sunday my friends and I planned to go shopping, and we just window-shopped in Liberty Market.

Errors: incorrect tense and pronoun order 'I'm you plan' is ungrammatical and should be past simple 'my friends and I planned' [ID 5/12/26], redundant use 'I'm we are' and wrong article 'the shopping' should be 'go shopping' or 'went shopping' [ID 5/22]. Suggestions: use past simple for completed past actions ('planned', 'window-shopped'), put the subject 'my friends and I' in correct order, and use 'window-shopped' or 'went window shopping'.

× Yes, I compare price when I shop because I am not very well.

✓ Yes, I compare prices when I shop because I am not very wealthy.

Errors: 'price' should be plural 'prices' when speaking generally about comparing multiple prices [ID 1], and 'I am not very well' incorrectly uses 'well' (an adverb/adjective) instead of 'well-off' or 'wealthy' to refer to financial status [ID 13/12]. Suggestions: use 'compare prices' for plural/general, and choose correct adjective 'wealthy' or phrase 'well off' to describe finances.

× So I always compare the prices where I can buy these product easily and in a cheap.

✓ So I always compare the prices so I can buy these products easily and cheaply.

Errors: wrong relative structure 'where I can buy' and article/number 'these product' should be plural 'these products' [ID 1/11], and 'in a cheap' is incorrect adjective/adverb use; use adverb 'cheaply' [ID 13/20]. Suggestions: use plural 'products', rephrase to show purpose or result ('so I can buy'), and use adverb 'cheaply' for manner.

× So I prefer to buy the products where is the prices are low.

✓ So I prefer to buy products where the prices are low.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the products' can be 'products' in general (article error) [ID 22], and extra words 'where is the prices are low' is ungrammatical; correct relative clause is 'where the prices are low' (subject-verb agreement and structure) [ID 27/26]. Suggestions: remove redundant words and use correct relative clause order 'where the prices are low'.

× So I always prefer to compare prices.

✓ So I always compare prices.

Issue: redundancy 'always prefer to compare' when earlier said 'I compare prices'—simpler present simple 'I always compare prices' is natural for habitual actions (present tense consistency) [ID 6/26]. Suggestion: use concise present simple for habits.

× Yes, most of the time it is very difficult to make a choices when I go to the shop because I cannot decide what I can buy and where the shop I can buy.

✓ Yes, most of the time it is very difficult to make choices when I go to the shop because I cannot decide what to buy and in which shop I can buy it.

Errors: 'make a choices' mixes singular article with plural noun; should be 'make choices' or 'make a choice' [ID 1/22]. Awkward clause 'what I can buy and where the shop I can buy' should be 'what to buy and in which shop I can buy it' (infinitive use and preposition placement) [ID 8/11/26]. Suggestions: use 'what to buy' for decisions and specify location with 'in which shop' or 'where'.

× For example, cardi and ethnic I always difficult to choose what I can buy this and where.

✓ For example, with cardigans and ethnic clothes I always find it difficult to choose what to buy and where.

Errors: 'cardi and ethnic' is unclear; use full nouns 'cardigans and ethnic clothes' (word choice and plural) [ID 1/13]. Missing verb 'I always difficult' needs 'find it difficult' (sentence structure) [ID 26]. 'what I can buy this and where' should be 'what to buy and where' (infinitive and pronoun placement) [ID 8/12]. Suggestions: name items clearly, use 'find it difficult' for ability expressions, and use 'what to buy' for choices.

× So it is difficult for me.

✓ So it is difficult for me.

This sentence is correct grammatically. It appropriately uses present tense to describe a general difficulty. No change needed.

× No, I don't think so that always expensive products are always better than a cheaper one, because most of the time expensive product also broken very quickly rather than cheaper ones also, uh, run also, uh, run very a long time.

✓ No, I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones, because expensive products often break quickly, while cheaper ones can sometimes last a long time.

Errors: redundant words 'so that always' and article mismatch 'a cheaper one' should be 'cheaper ones' (plural) [ID 22/1]. 'expensive product also broken' lacks auxiliary and correct tense: should be 'expensive products often break quickly' (present simple for general statements) [ID 5/6/8]. Awkward comparative 'rather than cheaper ones also, uh, run also, uh, run very a long time' corrected to 'while cheaper ones can sometimes last a long time' (comparison and adverb placement) [ID 25/20]. Suggestions: simplify sentence, use plural nouns consistently, and use present simple for general truths ('are', 'break', 'last').

× So it is a not, uh, necessary. The only expensive product always better, uh, most of the time.

✓ So it is not necessary. Expensive products are not always better.

Errors: incorrect placement of article 'a not' should be 'not' (article error) [ID 22], awkward phrasing 'The only expensive product always better, uh, most of the time' is ungrammatical; correct general statement 'Expensive products are not always better' (word order and tense) [ID 26/6]. Suggestions: use clear negative 'it is not necessary' and a concise statement 'expensive products are not always better' for general opinion.