Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Nói ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ; sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản (thứ tự từ, thì, đại từ) và loại bỏ tiếng ồn như "uh". Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi; (2) Thêm 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ bằng liên từ (because / so) để giải thích lý do; (3) Chú ý dùng đúng dạng số nhiều/ít và bỏ các từ thừa. Ví dụ luyện tập: tập nói một câu chủ đề + một câu lý do hợp lý, không quá 2 câu phụ.

Ejemplo: I don't really enjoy shopping for clothes. I prefer shopping online because I find stores stressful when assistants approach me and try to pressure me to buy something.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Tránh cấu trúc lủng củng và lỗi ngữ pháp (mạo từ, số nhiều, động từ). Sử dụng liên từ hợp lý (because, so) và chia câu rõ ràng: trả lời + nguyên nhân + ví dụ ngắn. Nên dùng từ chính xác như "compare prices", "authenticity" hoặc "reputation". Luyện tập nói 2-3 câu logic, mỗi câu tối đa 20 từ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often compare prices because I am a student with a limited budget. I check several stores and online shops to find the best price and to make sure the product is genuine.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Tránh tiếng ồn (umm), rút gọn câu cho tự nhiên và dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng (I don't find it difficult to choose because...). Sửa ngữ pháp: số nhiều (options, things), vị trí từ (want to buy). Thêm một cụm chi tiết ngắn với liên từ (so / therefore) để giải thích cách bạn quyết định.

Ejemplo: I don't usually find it hard to choose because I often plan what I need beforehand. So when I go to a store or an online site, I quickly pick the items I already decided on.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Tránh ngôn ngữ không chính thức (kinda), sửa ngữ pháp, dùng ví dụ chính xác và rõ ràng (currency, item comparison). Trình bày ý kiến trực tiếp rồi giải thích với ví dụ cụ thể có số liệu hợp lý. Sửa lỗi phát âm/viết thành tiền tệ (Vietnam dong) và so sánh đúng (cheaper vs more expensive item).

Ejemplo: I don't think expensive products are always better; it depends on the item. For instance, I once bought a cheap pen that lasted longer and wrote more smoothly than a more expensive one, so price doesn't always equal quality.

× Well, I would say that shopping is not my cup of tea since especially when we I have to go to the physical store because I feel very annoyed if the manager or the assistant just come to come to me and said everything to uh, encourage me to buy something.

✓ Well, I would say that shopping is not my cup of tea, especially when I have to go to a physical store, because I feel very annoyed if the manager or the assistant comes up to me and says everything to encourage me to buy something.

The sentence contains several pronoun and subject issues: 'we I' is incorrect — choose one subject; here 'I' is appropriate. 'the manager or the assistant come' has a subject-verb agreement problem (singular subject requires 'comes'). 'said' should be present 'says' to match the present habitual meaning. Also 'come to come to me' is redundant; use 'comes up to me'. Suggestion: keep a single clear subject, ensure verb agrees with nearest singular subject, and use present simple for habitual actions.

× Just because I'm a student and I have some financial problems every month so that when I need to buy something I should make a comparisons of a lot of shop and to find out what shop have an authenticity and the lowest price for me.

✓ Because I'm a student and I have some financial problems every month, when I need to buy something I should compare many shops to find out which shop has authentic products and the lowest price for me.

Errors include incorrect verb forms and noun forms: 'make a comparisons' should be 'compare' (use base verb) or 'make comparisons' (no article). 'a lot of shop' should be 'many shops' (plural). 'what shop have an authenticity' is ungrammatical; use 'which shop has authentic products' — singular 'shop' requires 'has'. Also remove redundant 'just' and 'so that' here. Suggestion: use 'compare' for the action, use plural 'shops', and use 'which shop has' for identification.

× I don't think that I have difficulties in choosing about a lot of option because when umm when I go shopping, I just have a lot of thing that I would want buy in my mind so that I just come to directly to the store or the e-commerce platform and then pick up what I want to buy.

✓ I don't think that I have difficulties choosing from many options because when I go shopping, I already have many things I want to buy in mind, so I just go directly to the store or the e-commerce platform and then pick up what I want to buy.

Problems: 'difficulties in choosing about' should be 'difficulties choosing from' ('choose from' is correct collocation). 'a lot of option' should be 'many options'. 'a lot of thing' -> 'many things'. 'would want buy' needs 'to' -> 'want to buy'. 'come to directly to the store' incorrect preposition/order; use 'go directly to the store'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and collocations ('choose from', 'go to'), and ensure infinitive 'want to buy'.

× I think it kinda depends because on most of the cheap thing that I buy for myself, it just works really good.

✓ I think it kind of depends because most of the cheap things that I buy for myself just work really well.

Errors: 'kinda' is informal; use 'kind of' in neutral speech. 'because on most of the cheap thing' should be 'because most of the cheap things' (remove 'on' and pluralize 'thing'). 'it just works really good' — adverb required: 'works really well' and plural agreement 'things ... work'. Suggestion: use adverbs for manner ('well') and match plural subjects with plural verbs ('things ... work').

× For example when I buy a pen in the bookstore which stood at six a Vietnam dog, it's just better than a book that buy in a bookstore which cost 40.

✓ For example, when I bought a pen at the bookstore that cost six Vietnamese dong, it was better than a pen bought at another bookstore that cost 40 dong.

This sentence has several structure and tense errors: 'stood at six a Vietnam dog' is unintelligible — correct to 'cost six Vietnamese dong'. Use past tense 'bought' if referring to a specific past purchase, and make comparisons clear: compare similar items (pen vs pen) or clarify if comparing pen to book. Also 'that buy in a bookstore which cost 40' should be 'bought at a bookstore that cost 40 dong'. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases, correct currency phrasing ('six Vietnamese dong'), consistent past tense for specific past events, and compare comparable items.