Part 1
Examinador
Do you like shopping?
Candidato
Definitely. I like it when I'm feel down. I always go to shopping to buy something I want to eat and when I look at colors and all kinds of things, I feel relaxed.
Examinador
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Candidato
Yes I do because I tend to use lower price to buy a high quality things. It's more reasonable I think. So I always compare price to choose one more reasonable things.
Examinador
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I'm floored in making choice. When I meeting same price about different brand, I will difficult to choose one. Umm at this moment I will ask others.
Examinador
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Candidato
No I don't. For example some famous brands always have a higher price but don't present their product is better than other brands. So I always choose a rather lower price but their products is highest high quality.
Do you like shopping?
Puntuación: 68.0Sugerencia: 回答要注意语法和自然表达,保持简洁并直接回应问题。可以把感受和具体细节分成主题句和支持句,避免冗余。注意动词形式(例如“I feel”而不是“I'm feel”),以及固定搭配(go shopping, buy something to eat)。
Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I often go shopping when I'm feeling down because buying a snack or looking at colorful items lifts my mood. For example, browsing a market or boutique usually makes me feel relaxed and happier.
Do you compare prices when you shop? Why?
Puntuación: 62.0Sugerencia: 回答要用更清晰的逻辑和正确的词汇,避免重复。用连接词(because, so, therefore)组织原因和结果,注意单复数和词序(high-quality things, lower-priced)。
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually compare prices because I try to buy high-quality items at lower prices. Therefore, I check different stores and online reviews to find the most reasonable option.
Is it difficult for you to make choices when you shop?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 需要更自然和准确的表达,使用常用短语(be torn between, find it difficult to choose)并给出具体情境或例子。注意时态和语序(when I encounter items with the same price),避免填充词(umm)。
Ejemplo: Yes, I often find it difficult to choose, especially when two brands cost the same. In that case I'm torn between them, so I usually ask friends for advice or read online reviews to decide.
Do you think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答观点明确,但表达需更精准和自然。用更合适的对比词(not always, often, sometimes)并给出具体例子或原因。注意形容词顺序和比较结构(higher-priced, higher quality, better quality)。
Ejemplo: No, I don't think so. Some famous brands are higher-priced but not necessarily better. For example, I once bought a less expensive phone from a smaller brand that had better battery life and performance than a well-known model.
× I like it when I'm feel down.
✓ I like it when I'm feeling down.
句子中使用进行时来表达处于某种情绪状态更自然。原句中 “I'm feel” 是错误的动词形式组合,应使用现在进行时 “I'm feeling”。建议:遇到表示当下正在发生的状态或情绪时使用 be + -ing 结构。
× I always go to shopping to buy something I want to eat and when I look at colors and all kinds of things, I feel relaxed.
✓ I always go shopping to buy things I want to eat, and when I look at colors and all kinds of things, I feel relaxed.
短语 “go shopping” 为固定搭配,不应加 to。并且“something I want to eat”改为复数或泛指名词“things”。建议:记住常见的动词短语搭配,如 go shopping, go swimming 等。
× Yes I do because I tend to use lower price to buy a high quality things.
✓ Yes, I do because I tend to buy high-quality things at lower prices.
语序和量词使用不当。英文中高质量用复合形容词 high-quality,且 things 为复数;表示价格低应用复数或不可数短语 “lower prices” 或 “at a lower price”。建议:形容词修饰名词时注意连字符和单复数一致,表示方式用介词短语“at + price”。
× It's more reasonable I think.
✓ I think that's more reasonable.
语序更符合英语表达习惯,应将评价放在主句并用引导词连接。建议:把短语“ I think”放在句首或句尾并保持主句结构完整。
× So I always compare price to choose one more reasonable things.
✓ So I always compare prices to choose the more reasonable one.
price/prices 单复数用法不当;“one”指代单个物品时名词应为单数且形容词比较级前用定冠词 the;things 与 one 冲突。建议:注意代词one与名词复数的搭配,以及比较级前使用 the。
× Yes, I'm floored in making choice.
✓ Yes, I'm floored when making choices.
短语 “floored” 通常与 when/ by 等连用,且“choice”应为复数形式 choices 表示做选择的情形。建议:调整从句连接词并注意名词单复数。
× When I meeting same price about different brand, I will difficult to choose one.
✓ When I meet products with the same price from different brands, I find it difficult to choose one.
原句时态和动词形式错误:“meeting” 应为简单现在 meet;“will difficult” 语法错误,应使用 find it difficult 或 am/feel/difficult(不可直接用形容词描述人)。另外名词短语需更自然表达。建议:条件状语从句用一般现在时;描述感受用 find it difficult to do。
× Umm at this moment I will ask others.
✓ Umm at that moment I would ask others.
“at this moment” 与叙述过去或一般情境不符,且语气更自然用 would 来表示习惯性或假设情形中的做法。如果是在描述一般习惯可说 “I ask others.” 建议:根据上下文选择时态和情态动词(this/that, will/would)。
× No I don't.
✓ No, I don't think so.
虽然原句在口语中可接受,但回答问题更完整自然应补充 think so,使否定更具体。建议:在回答判断性问题时用完整短语如 “I don't think so”。
× For example some famous brands always have a higher price but don't present their product is better than other brands.
✓ For example, some famous brands always have higher prices, but that doesn't mean their products are better than others.
原句中 a higher price 与比较对象不明确;“don't present” 用词不当,应表达“这并不意味着”;“product is better than other brands” 逻辑与语法混乱,应改为 “their products are better than others”。建议:使用固定表达 “that doesn't mean” 来否定普遍印象,并注意复数与代词一致。
× So I always choose a rather lower price but their products is highest high quality.
✓ So I always choose the lower-priced option, but their products are of the highest quality.
原句形容词和比较级/最高级使用混乱:rather lower 不合适,应该使用 the lower-priced 或 a lower price;“their products is” 主谓不一致,应为 are;“highest high quality” 冗余且顺序错误,应为 of the highest quality。建议:区分比较级和最高级,确保主谓一致,并用固定搭配 like “of the highest quality”。