Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more grammatical, concise and add one specific reason or example. Use a clear topic sentence, a linking word, and one supporting detail. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms (e.g., “I usually shop”, “fast sell” -> “flash sales”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I love shopping. I usually shop online on platforms like Shopee or Lazada because they often have flash sales and big discounts. For example, last month I bought a smartwatch at 40% off during a weekend sale.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a clear reason with a linking word and a specific example. Fix grammar (e.g., “compare prices”, “because some platforms offer different discount codes”). Keep it to two or three sentences and avoid filler words and repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because different platforms often offer different discounts. For example, when I wanted to buy an iPad, I checked TikTok Shop, Shopee and Lazada and chose the platform with the best discount code.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and explain the reason, then describe a concise strategy using correct grammar. Use linking words such as “because” and “so” correctly and be specific about your method (e.g., ‘I wait one day before buying’). Keep to two sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often find it difficult because I overthink which option is best. So, to avoid impulse buys, I usually wait one day before making a purchase to decide if I really need it.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and provide two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., “quality does not depend solely on price”, “I look at customer reviews and product videos”). Be coherent and concise; avoid unclear phrases like “respect from the customer” and use ‘reviews’ or ‘feedback’ instead.

Ejemplo: Definitely not. Quality does not depend solely on price; I check customer reviews and product videos to judge quality. For instance, a well-reviewed budget phone can outperform a more expensive model in battery life and reliability.

× Yes I do I really love shopping. I always shopping in the fast sell on online platform like Shopee or Lazada because they have many discount for me.

✓ Yes, I do. I really love shopping. I always shop during sales on online platforms like Shopee or Lazada because they have many discounts for me.

The original contains present tense and verb form errors. 'I always shopping' is incorrect; use the simple present 'I always shop' to describe habitual actions (present tense issue). 'fast sell' is incorrect collocation; use 'sales'. 'on online platform' should be plural 'on online platforms' for generality, and 'many discount' needs plural 'many discounts'. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual routines, choose correct collocations ('sales', 'platforms'), and match noun number with quantifiers.

× Yes, I always compare the price when I want to buy something because I think it's it's have the platform or shop that can provide a discount for example, when I want to buy. IPad cash I will compare on Tiktok and Shopee and Lazada because each platform they provide different code.

✓ Yes, I always compare prices when I want to buy something because I think there might be a platform or shop that can provide a discount. For example, when I want to buy an iPad, I compare on TikTok, Shopee, and Lazada because each platform provides different codes.

Multiple present-tense and grammar issues: 'compare the price' should be plural 'compare prices' for general items (present tense issue). 'it's it's have' is ungrammatical—use 'there might be' or 'there is' (there be issue and present tense). 'IPad cash' is unclear; corrected to 'buy an iPad' and use article 'an' (article errors). 'compare on Tiktok and Shopee and Lazada' simplified to 'compare on TikTok, Shopee, and Lazada' and 'each platform they provide' should be 'each platform provides' to agree with subject (subject-verb agreement). Suggestions: use simple present for habits, use 'there' constructions correctly, use articles before singular countable nouns, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, when is have many shop to to buy is very difficult for me because I always think so much about the thing that I want to shop.

✓ Yes, when there are many shops to choose from, it is very difficult for me because I always think too much about the things I want to buy.

The sentence has incorrect structure and several grammar problems: 'when is have many shop to to buy' is ungrammatical—use 'when there are many shops to choose from' (there be issue and pluralization). 'is very difficult' should be 'it is very difficult' to include subject (sentence structure error). 'think so much' is acceptable but 'think too much' is more natural (adverb choice). 'the thing that I want to shop' should be 'the things I want to buy' (verb choice and plural). Suggestions: introduce 'there are' for existence, use 'shops' plural, 'choose from' for selection, and 'buy' as the correct verb.

× So the solution for me is I will let the let yourself have the one days for thing when I want to buy something.

✓ So the solution for me is to give myself one day to think before I buy something.

Original misuses reflexive and pronoun forms: 'let yourself' is second person but speaker refers to themselves—use 'myself' (incorrect reflexive pronoun use). 'have the one days' is incorrect number and article—use 'one day' (singular and article errors). 'for thing when I want to buy something' is ungrammatical; 'to think before I buy something' expresses intended meaning. Suggestions: match reflexive pronoun to subject, use singular 'one day', and phrase purpose clearly with 'to think before I buy'.

× Definitely not. For me the quality product is not dependent on the prices, but it's depend on many factor and one factor that I will consider when I buy something is the feedback or the factory that they. Videos the product For me, the respect from the customer is very important because it is it can live vague about the quality of the thing.

✓ Definitely not. For me, product quality does not depend on the price; it depends on many factors. One factor I consider when I buy something is customer feedback or product review videos. For me, reviews from customers are very important because they can give a clear idea about the quality of the item.

This passage has several quantifier and agreement errors: 'the quality product' should be 'product quality' or 'the quality of a product' (word order and article issues). 'is not dependent on the prices' better as 'does not depend on the price' (singular generalization). 'it's depend' must be 'it depends' (present tense/subject-verb agreement). 'many factor' requires plural 'many factors' (quantifier and plural). 'the feedback or the factory that they. Videos the product' is garbled; corrected to 'customer feedback or product review videos' (word choice). 'the respect from the customer' is odd; 'reviews from customers' clarifies meaning. 'it can live vague' is incorrect; use 'they can give a clear idea' (verb choice and clarity). Suggestions: use correct noun forms with quantifiers, ensure subject-verb agreement, use clear collocations like 'customer feedback' and 'review videos', and write coherent clauses.