Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce filler words and correct small grammar issues.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping. For example, I buy groceries weekly to keep the household stocked, and I also shop for clothes for work and casual occasions, so I can maintain a practical wardrobe.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and make the reason clearer and more concise. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and give a specific example of how you compare prices.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because I don't want to overpay. For example, I check two or three stores and online shops before buying electronics so I can get the best deal.

Sugerencia: Clarify and organize your answer: give a direct position then explain two specific reasons. Avoid filler words and correct grammar (e.g., 'it feels difficult').

Ejemplo: Sometimes it is difficult to choose because I want good value for money and I also need the color and style to match my existing clothes. Therefore I often spend more time comparing options before deciding.

Sugerencia: Be precise and use clearer comparisons. State your opinion directly, then give a reason and an example. Correct grammar (e.g., 'cheaper ones can be better') and avoid vague phrases.

Ejemplo: I don't think expensive products are always better. Generally they may offer higher quality, but cheaper items can be equally good; for instance, some mid-range phones perform as well as premium models, so I choose based on product reviews and features rather than price.

× I do like shopping. I shop for my daily grocery item, which is necessary for households.

✓ I do like shopping. I shop for my daily grocery items, which are necessary for households.

Plural and agreement: 'grocery item' should be plural 'grocery items' because 'daily' implies repeated multiple items; 'which is necessary' must agree with plural subject so use 'which are necessary'. Use of present habits is correct but ensure noun and verb agreement. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for regularly repeated items and match the verb to the noun's number.

× At the same time, I do like shopping for my for shopping.

✓ At the same time, I also like shopping for clothes.

Sentence structure and redundancy: The original repeats 'for shopping' and is ungrammatical. Simplify and use the correct object 'clothes'. Suggestion: Remove repeated words and state the object clearly.

× I do shopping clothes for my official use as well as my casual outfit.

✓ I buy clothes for my official use as well as for casual wear.

Verb and preposition: 'do shopping clothes' is incorrect; use 'buy clothes'. Also use preposition 'for' before both purposes and 'casual wear' is the natural phrase. Suggestion: Use 'buy' with the object and parallel prepositional phrases.

× So yeah, I do like shopping.

✓ So yeah, I really do like shopping.

Stylistic emphasis: Grammatically acceptable but sounds informal; adding 'really' clarifies emphasis. Suggestion: Keep or refine depending on formality.

× I do compare uh, prices when I am shopping, uh, because it's really important.

✓ I do compare prices when I am shopping because it is really important.

Fillers removal: 'uh' are speech fillers and commas were misplaced. Contraction 'it's' can be expanded to 'it is' in formal correction. Suggestion: Remove fillers and unnecessary commas for clarity.

× I used to compare two or three shops, uh, for the same product and price variation because I don't want to pay extra and uh, it's a really important and a basic, uh, personality.

✓ I used to compare two or three shops for the same product to check price variations because I did not want to pay extra, and I think this is a very important basic quality.

Tense and word choice: Mixed present 'don't' with past 'used to'. For past habitual behaviour keep past: 'did not want'. 'Price variation' better as 'price variations' or 'to check price variations'. 'Personality' is wrong word; use 'quality'. Suggestion: Keep consistent tense and use appropriate noun choice.

× I think that everyone.

✓ I think everyone does the same.

Incomplete sentence: 'I think that everyone.' is fragmentary and lacks a verb/complement. Complete the thought by adding 'does the same' or similar. Suggestion: Ensure sentences have subject and predicate.

× Sometimes, uh, it feel difficult for me when I am shopping, uh, because uh, shopping is not uh, uh, really easy thing and uh, I have to get the value for money and at the same time the color choice, everything should work perfectly.

✓ Sometimes it feels difficult for me when I am shopping because shopping is not really an easy thing, and I have to get value for money; at the same time the colour choice and everything else should work perfectly.

Subject-verb agreement and articles: 'it feel' should be 'it feels'. Missing article 'an' before 'easy thing'. Run-on sentence: split or use semicolon. 'colour' spelling may vary; keep consistent. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with subject and include articles where needed; break long sentences for clarity.

× Mostly expensive products are better than the cheaper world.

✓ Mostly expensive products are better than cheaper ones.

Incorrect noun: 'cheaper world' is nonsensical; comparison requires 'ones' to refer to 'products'. Suggestion: Use 'ones' or repeat the noun for clear comparison.

× However, sometimes the cheaper one get betters.

✓ However, sometimes the cheaper ones get better.

Number and verb form: 'one' vs 'ones' and verb agreement: 'get' should match plural 'ones' so 'get better'. Also 'betters' is incorrect; use comparative 'better'. Suggestion: Match noun number with verb and use correct comparative forms.

× But you have to always find that the best quality of the product, not basis of the price.

✓ But you should always look for the best quality of the product, not judge it on the basis of price.

Preposition and verb choice: 'find that the best quality' is awkward; use 'look for'. 'not basis of the price' needs 'judge it on the basis of price'. Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'look for' and 'judge on the basis of'.

× You should buy product on the basis of its own quality.

✓ You should buy a product on the basis of its own quality.

Article omission: 'product' needs an article; use 'a product' or 'products'. Suggestion: Include appropriate articles before singular countable nouns.