Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Combine sentences to be more concise, avoid redundancy and add a brief reason or example to enrich the answer. Aim for 2–4 sentences total and use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping, mainly for essentials like food, clothes and electronic gadgets because I like keeping my devices up to date. For example, I usually buy groceries weekly and replace small tech items every year.

Sugerencia: Correct small hesitations and grammar (e.g., remove filler words like 'like'), use a linking phrase to explain reason clearly, and give a specific method or example of how you compare prices.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices online because I want to get the best value. For instance, I check two or three websites and read reviews before deciding to avoid wasting money.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitations and fix grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'Yes, it's always difficult for me'). Be specific about why it's difficult and use linking words to structure the answer. Avoid unclear words like 'charges' if you mean 'choices' or 'options'.

Ejemplo: Yes, it is often difficult for me because there are so many options. For example, last month I visited several shops to buy gifts for friends and I felt confused about which style and price range to choose.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar (e.g., 'I think it depends') and use clearer vocabulary ('not everything expensive has good quality'). Provide a brief reason and a suggested action, and avoid trailing off. Use a linking word to connect opinion and advice.

Ejemplo: I think it depends; expensive items are not always better because price doesn't guarantee quality. Therefore, I usually read reviews and compare specifications before buying to make a more informed choice.

× Yes I do. I love shopping. Mostly I shop for necessary things in my life such as food, clothing as well as technological devices.

✓ Yes, I do. I love shopping. Mostly I shop for necessary things in my life, such as food, clothing, and technological devices.

Missing commas and missing comma before 'and' in a list (Oxford comma optional but helpful). Also need a comma after introductory 'Yes' and between clauses. These are article/ punctuation style issues classified here as article errors in this task. Suggestion: add commas to separate items and after 'Yes' for clarity.

× Yes I do, especially when I buy something online because I want to like buy the cheapest. I don't want to waste a lot of money.

✓ Yes, I do, especially when I buy something online because I want to buy the cheapest option. I don't want to waste a lot of money.

The filler 'like' interrupts the verb phrase and is unnecessary. Use the base verb 'buy' after 'want to'. Also 'the cheapest' is incomplete; add 'option' or 'one' to show what is being compared. Suggestion: remove filler 'like' and use 'buy the cheapest option'.

× Yes is always difficult for me like like the last time I going I went to uh uh, so many shops to buy gifts for my friends.

✓ Yes, it is always difficult for me. For example, the last time I went to so many shops to buy gifts for my friends.

Multiple problems: missing subject 'it' for 'is', incorrect tense/form 'going I went' and filler repetition 'like like' and 'uh uh'. Use simple past 'went' for a past event and include a subject for 'is'. Suggestion: remove fillers, use 'it is' and 'the last time I went'.

× I was confused what to buy because there are so many charges.

✓ I was confused about what to buy because there are so many choices.

Wrong word 'charges' used; correct word is 'choices'. Also add preposition 'about' after 'confused' to link to the clause. Suggestion: use 'confused about what to buy' and 'choices' instead of 'charges'.

× I think it's depends. Not everything that expensive or good quality qualities.

✓ I think it depends. Not everything that is expensive is good quality.

Incorrect verb form 'it's depends' should be 'it depends' (no auxiliary). Second sentence missing verby structure and uses redundant 'qualities'. Use 'is' twice to compare 'expensive' and 'good quality'. Suggestion: say 'it depends' and 'Not everything that is expensive is good quality.'

× So yeah, I think before buying something we have to read the comments and yeah, before the.

✓ So, yeah, I think before buying something we should read the comments and reviews before deciding.

Sentence is incomplete and repetitive ('and yeah, before the.'). Replace vague ending with a complete clause like 'before deciding'. Also 'should' is more natural than 'have to' here for advice. Suggestion: finish the sentence with the intended action, e.g., 'before deciding'.