Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be slightly more natural and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one brief reason with a linking word. Avoid repeating ideas and keep pronouns and tense accurate.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping. I usually shop online because it’s more convenient, especially since I’m often busy, and I can compare items quickly.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and coherence: use clear linking words (for example, because/so) and correct verb forms and articles. Keep it to two or three sentences: a topic sentence and one supporting reason with a specific example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because it helps me save money. For example, I check several websites before buying electronics so I can find the best deal.

Sugerencia: Make grammar consistent and use linking words to connect ideas. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example with correct tense and articles. Avoid fragmented clauses.

Ejemplo: Usually it isn’t difficult for me to decide what to buy, but sometimes it is when the item is expensive. For example, when I bought a copier last year, I spent time comparing models and prices before deciding.

Sugerencia: Avoid overgeneralizations and unsupported claims. Give a balanced view using linking words (although/however) and provide a brief reason or exception. Correct grammar, articles, and avoid stereotyping countries of manufacture.

Ejemplo: Not always. Although expensive products are often made with higher-quality materials, cheaper items can still offer good value. For instance, some budget brands make durable electronics, so I judge items by reviews and features rather than price alone.

× Definitely I do because it's helped me save money.

✓ Definitely I do because it helps me save money.

The original mixes present ('I do') with present perfect ('it's helped') incorrectly. The intended general fact should use the simple present 'helps'. Use simple present for habitual or general truths: 'it helps me save money.'

× Beside that I don't think people want to pay more when the thing are the still the same.

✓ Besides that, I don't think people want to pay more when things are still the same.

Use 'Besides' (not 'Beside') as a transition. 'the thing are the still the same' has word order and agreement errors: 'things' plural with 'are', and 'still' should precede 'the same' without 'the'. Also add a comma after the transition. Correct: 'Besides that, I don't think people want to pay more when things are still the same.'

× I often search it before I purchase them.

✓ I often search for them before I purchase them.

'Search' requires the preposition 'for' when followed by the object. Also the pronoun reference must be consistent: if referring to 'products' use 'them' for both occurrences. Alternatively, 'I often search for information about them before I buy.'

× just sometimes, especially thing that expensive.

✓ Just sometimes, especially expensive things.

The original has incorrect word order and missing article. Use plural 'things' with adjective before noun: 'expensive things.' Omit unnecessary words and keep phrase concise: 'especially expensive things.'

× For example when I decided to purchase a copy machine, I need to think about it and compare the price before I decide to buy.

✓ For example, when I decide to purchase a copy machine, I need to think about it and compare prices before I buy.

Maintain present tense for general habits: 'when I decide' instead of 'decided'. Use consistent simple present for habitual actions ('I need', 'before I buy'). Use plural 'prices' when comparing multiple offers. Add comma after 'For example.'

× I think it's yeah, definitely because expensive product they usually use a high quality thing, while for the cheap item always they always use the product that made in China.

✓ I think so, definitely, because expensive products usually use higher-quality materials, while cheap items often use products made in China.

Remove filler 'it's yeah' and use 'I think so.' Ensure plural agreement: 'expensive products' and 'cheap items.' Use adjective phrase 'higher-quality materials' instead of 'a high quality thing.' Place adverbs correctly ('often') and use correct passive form 'made in China.'

× This is in my opinion. So everyone have.

✓ This is my opinion, so everyone may think differently.

'This is my opinion' is more natural than 'This is in my opinion.' 'So everyone have' has subject-verb agreement error; 'everyone' is singular and needs 'has' but the intended meaning is that others may disagree. Use 'may think differently' to express that idea.