Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer grammatical, concise and well-structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and incorrect verb forms (e.g., "I really enjoy shopping", not "I really into shopping").

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy shopping. For example, every weekend I go to the mall with my friends, and we often spend time in the shoe section looking for new basketball shoes when we need them.

Sugerencia: Give a direct reason in one clear sentence, then add a concise explanation using linking words. Use natural phrases like "compare prices" and "get the best value" instead of awkward translations. Avoid filler sounds and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to get the best value for my money. By comparing options online or in stores, I can choose cheaper items with good quality.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and naturally: state whether it's difficult, then explain briefly with a supporting reason using linking words. Correct grammar for subjects and articles (e.g., "I'm not the person who needs").

Ejemplo: No, it's not difficult for me to make choices. I usually compare prices first, and if the price is acceptable I simply buy the item I like.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion in one sentence, then support it with a specific reason and an example. Use correct comparative forms ("more cost-effective", "cheaper ones"). Avoid repetition and awkward phrases.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think expensive products are always better. In my view, many cheaper items offer similar quality and are more cost-effective, for example, non-branded headphones can sound almost as good as expensive ones.

× Yeah, I really into shopping and for an example, every weekend I will go to the shopping mall with my friends.

✓ Yeah, I'm really into shopping and, for example, every weekend I go to the shopping mall with my friends.

The original sentence omits the verb 'be' before 'really into' and uses 'for an example' incorrectly. 'Really into' requires the verb 'be' (present tense) so use 'I'm'. 'For example' is the correct phrase. Also, 'every weekend I will go' is better as simple present 'I go' to express habitual action.

× We may take a lot of time into the shoe market to buying some basketball shoes if we need.

✓ We may spend a lot of time in the shoe market buying some basketball shoes if we need to.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'take time into' and 'to buying' which mixes infinitive and -ing forms. Use 'spend time in' for duration and location, and 'buying' as the gerund after 'spend time' or use the infinitive 'to buy' after 'need' as 'if we need to'. Also change 'the shoe market' to 'the shoe market' is fine, but 'in' is the correct preposition.

× Uh, yes, absolutely 'cause I want to let my decision become cost effective, uh, let my shopping have the. Low price and better.

✓ Uh, yes, absolutely, because I want my decisions to be cost-effective and for my shopping to have lower prices and better value.

Several structural issues: 'cause' should be 'because' in formal speech; 'let my decision become cost effective' is awkward — use 'I want my decisions to be cost-effective' with the infinitive 'to be'. 'Let my shopping have the. Low price and better' is fragmented; rephrase to 'for my shopping to have lower prices and better value.' Also hyphenate 'cost-effective' and use 'lower' rather than 'low'.

× Just not quite difficult for me. I'm not the people need lots of time to choose.

✓ It's not very difficult for me. I'm not one of those people who need lots of time to choose.

'Just not quite difficult for me' is unidiomatic; use 'It's not very difficult for me.' 'I'm not the people' incorrectly uses 'the' and 'people' as subject pronoun; correct phrase is 'I'm not one of those people who...' to refer to a subgroup.

× I just compare the price, if the price is OK and I will choose the thing I like.

✓ I just compare the prices; if the price is OK, I choose the thing I like.

Use plural 'prices' for general shopping. In conditional sentences about habitual actions, use present simple in both clauses: 'if the price is OK, I choose...' rather than mixing with future 'I will choose.' Also replace comma with semicolon or separate clauses for clarity.

× No, absolutely not for me. In my perspective, I don't need such expensive products such as luxury decorations 'cause they are the they are not cost effectively as the price lower one.

✓ No, absolutely not for me. In my view, I don't need such expensive products, such as luxury decorations, because they are not cost-effective compared to cheaper ones.

'In my perspective' is better as 'In my view.' The clause repeats 'they are the they are' which is an error. 'Not cost effectively as the price lower one' mixes adverb/adjective forms and comparison. Use 'not cost-effective compared to cheaper ones.' 'Cost-effective' is an adjective; 'compared to' introduces the comparison and 'cheaper ones' is the correct noun phrase.