Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve fluency and coherence by avoiding filler words and organizing ideas into a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 specific supporting details. Keep answers within 3–4 concise sentences, use correct verb forms and more precise vocabulary (e.g., groceries, electronics).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy shopping, especially on weekends when I go with my mother. I usually shop for clothes and household groceries, and occasionally I buy small electronic appliances for the home. Shopping is relaxing and gives me ideas for updating my wardrobe and home.

Sugerencia: Clarify meaning and remove unclear phrases. Give a direct reason first, then one specific supporting detail using linking words (e.g., because, so). Avoid irrelevant remarks. Use correct collocations like “compare prices” and “online and local markets.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because I want the best value. For example, I check the price of an item online and then compare it with local shop prices so I can decide whether to order or buy in person.

Sugerencia: Be concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + brief reason), then add one concrete supporting detail. Reduce hesitations and use correct grammar (e.g., “prepare a shopping list”).

Ejemplo: Not usually. I prepare a shopping list at home, so I know exactly what I need and I can make decisions quickly. This helps me avoid impulse buys and saves time in the store.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion and support it with a reason and an example. Avoid contradictory or confusing phrases. Use linking words (for example, however) and correct comparative forms (expensive, cheaper, better quality).

Ejemplo: I don’t think expensive products are always better. Sometimes higher price means better materials or service, but often cheaper items can offer similar quality; for example, I once bought a budget phone that performed as well as a more expensive model for my needs.

× Definitely as I am a shopaholic person, I love to do shopping on the weekends with my mother.

✓ Definitely; I am a shopaholic, so I love shopping on weekends with my mother.

The original sentence has redundant words and awkward verb use. 'Love to do shopping' is unidiomatic; use 'love shopping' or 'love to shop'. Also 'on the weekends' can be 'on weekends'. This fixes subject-verb flow and makes the sentence natural.

× I usually go to do shopping for sometime, uh, just for myself.

✓ I usually go shopping for a while, just for myself.

'Go to do shopping' is incorrect; the correct pattern is 'go shopping'. 'Sometime' should be 'for a while' when indicating duration. Using the proper verb form and phrase improves grammar and clarity.

× I wear the clothes and sometimes I bought a grocery for at home.

✓ I try on clothes and sometimes I buy groceries for my home.

The sentence mixes present ('wear') and past ('bought') incorrectly. Use consistent present tense to match habitual actions: 'try on' or 'wear' for clothes shopping, and 'buy groceries' (plural) for items. Also 'a grocery' is incorrect; use 'groceries' or 'a grocery item'.

× Uh, like uh, there are lots of time and I just bought the electronic appli appliances for my home.

✓ There is often plenty of time, and I sometimes buy electronic appliances for my home.

'Lots of time' is fine but needs correct verb agreement: use 'there is often plenty of time' or 'there are lots of times' depending on meaning. 'I just bought' is past; use 'I sometimes buy' for habitual actions. 'appli appliances' is a repetition/error; use 'electronic appliances'.

× Well, I love to do war again and also I have quite knowledge about the products because I usually do the shopping from online as well from local market shopping.

✓ Well, I love to compare prices, and I also have considerable knowledge about products because I usually shop online as well as in the local market.

The phrase 'love to do war again' is incorrect and likely intended as 'compare' or 'shop around'. 'Have quite knowledge' is ungrammatical; use 'have considerable knowledge' or 'have quite a bit of knowledge'. Use 'shop online' and 'in the local market' for correct prepositions and verb forms.

× So I compare these the, uh prices with the online shopping to the traditional shopping.

✓ So I compare the prices online with those in traditional shops.

Original has misplaced article 'the' and awkward structure. Use 'compare the prices online with those in traditional shops' or 'compare online prices with traditional store prices' for clarity and correct article/pronoun reference.

× So that is why I love to and also I login. Thanks.

✓ So that is why I like comparing prices, and I often log in to online stores to check them.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear ('I love to' incomplete; 'I login' lacks object). Provide a complete clause: 'I like comparing prices' and explain purpose of logging in. Use 'log in' as a phrasal verb with context.

× Uh, well, not always, uh, because I always make a list of my things and I just prepare from my home, but I want to bought and what I, uh, things I uh, what?

✓ Uh, well, not always, because I always make a list of things and I prepare at home for what I want to buy.

Mixes tenses and has incorrect verb forms: 'want to bought' is wrong; use 'want to buy'. 'Prepare from my home' should be 'prepare at home'. Clean up to consistent present tense for habitual behavior.

× So that is why I didn't find any type of difficulty, uh, when I make the choices.

✓ So I don't find it difficult when I make choices.

Tense inconsistency: 'didn't find' (past) with 'when I make' (present). For habitual actions use present: 'I don't find it difficult when I make choices'. Also simplify 'any type of difficulty' to 'it difficult'.

× Well, according to my perspective, it is a wrong thing, but it's in, uh, sometimes it's uh, just a myth.

✓ Well, in my opinion, that is not always true; sometimes it's just a myth.

'According to my perspective' is wordy; 'in my opinion' is natural. 'It is a wrong thing' is awkward; say 'that is not always true'. Simplify and use appropriate adverb placement.

× According to me, the expenses products are better than cheaper one because always, sometimes the cheaper are more, they have more quality.

✓ In my view, expensive products are not always better than cheaper ones; sometimes cheaper items have better quality.

Grammar errors: 'expenses products' should be 'expensive products'; 'cheaper one' must be plural 'cheaper ones'. Word order and agreement corrected. Use consistent comparative structure and avoid conflicting modifiers ('always, sometimes').

× So that is why it is quite met between these type of.

✓ So that's why the quality comparison depends on the specific products.

Original is incomplete and unclear ('quite met between these type of' has no clear meaning). Provide a complete, grammatically correct sentence that conveys the intended idea: comparisons vary by product.