Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and clarity by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting details. Avoid rambling and irrelevant reasons (e.g. ‘to be famous’). Use linking words to structure the answer (e.g. 'but', 'because', 'for example'). Aim for 2–3 sentences and correct collocations like 'new clothes' and 'for presentations' or 'for trips'.

Ejemplo: I don't really enjoy shopping, but I do like buying new clothes for specific occasions. For example, I buy new shoes and outfits for class trips or presentations because I want to look presentable.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence accuracy and concise expression. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a brief reason and an example. Use correct tense and plural forms ('every day', 'I save a small amount', 'cheaper ones') and linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because I am a student and have a limited budget. For example, I often search online to find cheaper alternatives before I decide to buy something.

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct grammar. Begin with a direct answer ('No') then give a reason with clear linking words. Correct phrases: 'talented in design', 'fitting room', 'choose the right size'. Reduce hesitations and repetition.

Ejemplo: No, I don't find it difficult because I have a good eye for style. My friends say I am talented in design, so when I try clothes on in the fitting room I quickly decide and choose the size that fits me.

Sugerencia: Avoid vague and unclear comparisons. Give a balanced opinion with specific reasons and examples. Use correct vocabulary ('counterfeit', 'quality', 'durability') and logical linking words ('sometimes', 'however', 'for example'). Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't think expensive products are always better, but they are often higher quality. For example, branded shoes may last longer than cheap imitations, however some mid-priced items can be just as good if you check materials and reviews.

× Well, I'm not really love it, but kind of like when I'm there something like a new clothes, new shoes for my presentations or like my trips are going with my classes on definitely in summer where I have to a lot of trips to, you know, a foreign countries that I need to buy something new, you know, just uploading to my Instagram to be famous.

✓ Well, I don't really love it, but I kind of like it when I'm there and see new clothes or new shoes for my presentations or for trips with my class, especially in summer when I have a lot of trips to foreign countries and need to buy something new to upload to my Instagram.

Multiple verb and tense errors: 'I'm not really love it' should be 'I don't really love it' (use do + base verb for present simple negative). Missing pronoun and verbs: add 'I' and 'see' to make 'when I'm there and see new clothes'. 'New clothes' is plural so keep uncountable/plural noun form. 'My trips are going with my classes' is incorrect word order and verb choice; use 'trips with my class' or 'trips with my classes'. 'On definitely in summer' is ungrammatical; use 'especially in summer'. 'I have to a lot of trips to, you know, a foreign countries' should be 'I have a lot of trips to foreign countries' (remove extra 'to' and use plural without article). 'Just uploading to my Instagram to be famous' needs an infinitive or clause: 'to upload to my Instagram' or 'to post on my Instagram'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct auxiliary verbs for negative and add missing verbs and articles where needed.

× Well, definitely, because I'm just a student, uh, I'm, uh, every single days I, I just accumulate a small money. So I didn't have a lot of money to buy, you know, uh, some things that, umm, have a, have a high price that when I'm buying this stuff, I'm always searching online to find, you know, a cheaper ones.

✓ Well, definitely, because I'm just a student. Every single day I accumulate a small amount of money, so I don't have a lot of money to buy things that have a high price. When I'm buying stuff, I'm always searching online to find cheaper ones.

Errors: 'every single days' should be 'every single day' (singular after 'every'). 'Accumulate a small money' is incorrect; use 'a small amount of money' or 'a little money'. Tense inconsistency: 'So I didn't have' should be present 'so I don't have' to match context. 'Some things that ... have a, have a high price' redundant articles; use 'things that have a high price' or 'expensive things'. 'A cheaper ones' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'cheaper ones' or 'a cheaper one'. Suggestion: correct quantifiers, maintain present tense for habitual actions, and avoid redundant articles.

× No, well, actually as a child, my friends told me that I have talented in designers. So I'm pretty confident in that my choices, uh, every time, uh, when I, when I, you know, try it in the feeding rooms, uh, I always, you know, umm, love it. So I'm just gonna choose my size to fit in, in this type clothes.

✓ No. Well, actually, as a child my friends told me that I am talented in design, so I'm pretty confident in my choices. Every time when I try clothes in the fitting room, I always like them, so I just choose my size to fit in this type of clothing.

Problems: 'I have talented in designers' is incorrect: use 'I am talented in design' or 'I have talent for design' (verb 'have' plus noun 'talent' or 'be' + adjective 'talented'). 'My choices, every time, when I try it in the feeding rooms' has pronoun and noun errors: 'try clothes in the fitting room' is correct, not 'feeding rooms'. 'I always ... love it' should match plural/plurality: 'I always like them' or 'I always love them'. 'I'm just gonna choose my size to fit in, in this type clothes' has preposition and noun form issues: 'choose my size to fit in this type of clothing' or 'this type of clothes' -> 'type of clothing' preferred. Suggestion: use correct verb 'be' for talent, correct noun forms, 'fitting room', and 'type of clothing'.

× Well, definitely, yes, 'cause like a Nike and versus to fight ones from, you know, China. It's different about the project. The, you know, the forums is actually paradise and when you try it, when you wash it every time the fight was gonna be fake.

✓ Well, definitely yes, because brand-name items like Nike are different from cheaper copies from China. The quality is different: brand items are better, and after washing, cheap ones tend to look fake.

Many errors: 'a Nike and versus to fight ones' is garbled. Use 'brand-name items like Nike' and 'different from cheaper copies' (use 'different from', not 'versus to'). 'It's different about the project' likely means 'the quality is different'. 'The forums is actually paradise' is unclear; likely 'the fabric is better' or 'the finish is actually superior'. 'When you try it, when you wash it every time the fight was gonna be fake' should be 'after washing, cheap ones tend to look fake' (use 'after washing' and present tense 'tend to'). Fix article errors and word choice. Suggestion: replace vague words with 'quality', 'fabric', 'cheap copies', and maintain subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions.