Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and clear: state whether you like shopping, give 1–2 concise reasons using correct vocabulary, and avoid repetition or unclear words. Use a topic sentence, then one supporting detail linked with a connector. Pronounce or write key words correctly (e.g., 'shopping', not 'Sophie').

Ejemplo: Yes, I like shopping because it helps me relax and refresh my mind. For example, browsing stores or online shops gives me new ideas and makes me feel energized.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear reason with specific detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly, and avoid vague phrases. Mention what you compare (brands, discounts) and why (budget, value).

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually compare prices because I need to stick to a budget for my family. For instance, I check different brands and online deals to find the best value before I buy.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with a specific reason and an example. Use concise language and correct grammar; avoid repetition. Mention one strategy you use or could use to decide. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often find it hard to choose because I get attracted to many items in shops. For example, in a supermarket I see many products I like, so now I make a shopping list beforehand to avoid impulse buys.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and an example. Use comparison words ('sometimes', 'however') and correct singular/plural forms. Be concise and avoid vague phrases like 'a few people try cheaper'.

Ejemplo: I don't think expensive items are always better because quality depends on the brand and product. For example, I find that some affordable electronics perform as well as pricier ones, so I read reviews and compare features before buying.

× Yes, I like Sophie. Sophie is the favorite thing, sopping and relaxing about and feel refreshed and give me energy.

✓ Yes, I like shopping. Shopping is my favorite activity; it is relaxing, makes me feel refreshed, and gives me energy.

Student used 'Sophie' instead of 'shopping' (likely a pronunciation/spelling error) and mixed noun/adjective forms. 'Favorite thing' is awkward; 'favorite activity' is better. Verbs must agree: 'feel' should be 'makes me feel' and 'give' should be 'gives' to match singular subject 'shopping'. Also reorder to parallel structure and use adjectives ('relaxing') correctly.

× Yes, I compare prices when when I have shop because I have a meaningful family so and prices.

✓ Yes, I compare prices when I shop because I have a large family and need to save on prices.

Errors: duplicate 'when', incorrect verb form 'have shop' should be 'shop' or 'am shopping'. 'Meaningful family' is incorrect collocation; 'large family' or 'many family members' fits context. Use present simple 'I shop' for habitual action. Remove filler words 'so and prices' and clarify purpose.

× Yes, it is difficult for B choices when I am shopping because whenever I'm going to shopping in a supermarket and malls, I I love everything and I want to buy all sticks and I don't choose what who who I am what I absorbs.

✓ Yes, it is difficult to make choices when I am shopping because whenever I go shopping in supermarkets and malls, I like many things and want to buy everything, so I cannot decide what to choose.

Problems include 'B choices' which is unclear; corrected to 'make choices'. 'Going to shopping' is wrong; use 'go shopping' or 'am shopping'. Repeated words 'I I' and 'who who' removed. 'Buy all sticks' is meaningless; replaced with 'buy everything'. 'I don't choose what who who I am what I absorbs' is incoherent; replaced with clear clause 'cannot decide what to choose'.

× I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper one because sometimes cheaper 1 is good and expensive.

✓ I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones because sometimes cheaper products are good enough.

Mismatch: 'cheaper one' should be plural 'cheaper ones' to match 'products'. Also remove stray '1' and redundant 'and expensive'. Use 'cheaper products' for clarity and add 'good enough' to express the idea.

× Not everyone wants to buy expensive products but a few people try cheaper and compare the products.

✓ Not everyone wants to buy expensive products; many people try cheaper ones and compare the products.

'A few people' implies a small number; context suggests many people do so, so 'many people' fits better. 'Try cheaper' needs object 'cheaper ones' or 'cheaper products'. Clarify and use parallel structure 'try... and compare'.