Shopping— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and grammatical errors (e.g., "quite more convenient" → "much more convenient").

Ejemplo: No, I don't enjoy shopping much nowadays because online shopping is much more convenient. For example, I can compare products and read reviews at home, so I rarely go to busy malls and spend hours walking around.

Sugerencia: Provide a focused topic sentence and clearer supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Explain the cultural reference briefly and give a concrete example of how you compare prices (websites, apps, or visiting stores).

Ejemplo: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to save money and get the best value. For instance, I usually check at least three stores or use price comparison apps, and then choose the product with the best price-to-quality ratio.

Sugerencia: Clarify the meaning of "a Target person" or use a clearer phrase (e.g., "target-oriented" or "decisive"). Structure answer: state short direct answer, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar (tense and articles).

Ejemplo: No, it's usually easy for me because I'm quite decisive. Before I go shopping I make a list and imagine what I need, so when I see something I quickly decide whether it fits my needs and budget.

Sugerencia: This answer is unclear and contains several grammar and coherence problems. Avoid absolute statements; give a balanced view with reasons and an example. Use linking words (however, for example) and explain that price can reflect quality but not always. Keep it concise (1 topic sentence + 1–2 supporting sentences).

Ejemplo: I don't think expensive products are always better. In many cases higher price means better materials or service, but sometimes affordable items work just as well; for example, I prefer a mid-range phone because it offers similar features to top models at a lower cost.

× To be honest, not very much, especially during these days, the electronic and online shopping is quite more convenient for us to pick up and select the goods inside of going to the mall and walk around all the days feel tired to pick something.

✓ To be honest, not very much. These days, electronic and online shopping are much more convenient for us than going to the mall and walking around all day, which makes us feel tired when picking something.

The sentence has multiple preposition and structure issues: use 'these days' without 'during', use 'electronic and online shopping' as plural (agree with verb), use 'much more convenient than' instead of 'quite more convenient for us to ... inside of', and 'going to the mall' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also 'walk around all the days' should be 'walking around all day'. Suggest simplifying long clauses and using comparative structure 'more convenient than'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, of course I will compare the prices between different goods and there is a Chinese thing that you should compare prices and more more than three shops, so I usually not pick up the things in the same shop.

✓ Yes, of course I compare the prices of different goods, and there is a Chinese custom that you should compare prices in more than three shops, so I usually do not buy the same item from the same shop.

Pronoun and determiner use is incorrect: use 'compare the prices of' not 'between different goods' (though 'between' can be used, 'of' is more natural here), 'a Chinese thing' should be 'a Chinese custom', and 'more more than three shops' is redundant and ungrammatical—use 'in more than three shops'. 'I usually not pick up the things' is incorrect word order and verb choice; use 'I usually do not buy the same item'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× This help me save money and make a better decision.

✓ This helps me save money and make better decisions.

Subject-verb agreement requires third-person singular 'helps' not 'help'. Also 'make a better decision' can be pluralized to 'make better decisions' for general statements. The error falls under present participle/verb form and subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Well, usually not because I'm really a in Target person.

✓ Well, usually not, because I'm really a target-oriented person.

The phrase 'a in Target person' is ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is 'target-oriented' or 'decisive'—use an adjective phrase. Also capitalize 'Target' only if referring to the store; here it seems conceptual. Correct the article and adjective placement. Grammar problem type ID:12

× When I decided to buy something or shopping in the mall, I will read and I will imagine what kind of goods and what kind of things I would like to buy when I went to the shopping mall.

✓ When I decide to buy something or shop in the mall, I read and imagine what kinds of items I would like to buy before I go to the shopping mall.

Tense and verb form errors: mix of past and future ('decided', 'will', 'would', 'went') is inconsistent. For general habits use simple present: 'decide', 'shop', 'read', 'imagine', 'go'. Use 'shop' (verb) instead of 'shopping' in that clause. Use 'kinds of items' for countable plural. Place time sequence words correctly ('before I go'). Grammar problem type ID:6

× Honestly, from my perspective view, I definitely agree with this idea.

✓ Honestly, from my perspective, I definitely agree with this idea.

Redundant phrase 'perspective view' is incorrect; choose 'perspective' or 'point of view'. The sentence is otherwise fine. Remove redundancy for natural expression. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Well, sometimes the Aussie in many cultures they always the core core or the center of a lot of experience.

✓ Well, sometimes in many cultures Australians consider certain objects or traditions to be at the core or center of many experiences.

The original sentence has unclear subject and redundant words ('core core'), incorrect article and pronoun placement ('the Aussie... they always'). Clarify subject: 'Australians' (plural) and restructure: 'in many cultures, Australians consider X to be at the core'. Avoid repetition and ensure subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So I think that's quite reasonable for.

✓ So I think that's quite reasonable.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary at the end and causes sentence fragment. Remove it to complete the thought. Grammar problem type ID:26