Money— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant but can be improved by using a direct topic sentence, more precise timing, and smoother linking words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences, avoid vague phrases like “almost two or three days,” and add a brief reason or feeling to enrich the response. Use linking words such as “however”, “so”, or “because” to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I rarely borrow money from others. However, once my ATM stopped working and I urgently needed cash for groceries, so I borrowed some from a friend and returned it within two days. I felt relieved that my friend could help and I paid them back quickly.

Sugerencia: You answer directly but sound informal and use exaggerated phrases like “the most flexible person.” Improve by giving a concise topic sentence, a specific example or amount, and a linking phrase to explain reciprocity. Avoid vague claims and keep to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often lend money to friends when they need it. For example, last month I lent a friend 50 dollars to cover a taxi fare, and in return they helped me with a college project, so we usually support each other.

× I usually don't like borrowing money from others, but once I really needed money and my ATM was not working so I borrowed money from my friend and returned it in almost two or three days.

✓ I usually don't like borrowing money from others, but once I really needed money and my ATM was not working, so I borrowed money from my friend and returned it in about two or three days.

The sentence mostly uses past tense correctly but contains a minor phrasing issue: 'in almost two or three days' is awkward. Use 'about two or three days' for approximate durations. Also add a comma before 'so' to separate the clauses. Suggestion: replace 'in almost' with 'in about' and punctuate the compound sentence properly.

× In this case, I think I am the most flexible person to lend money to anyone.

✓ In this case, I think I am the most flexible person when it comes to lending money to others.

The original sentence uses 'to lend money to anyone' awkwardly and 'most flexible person to lend money to anyone' is ungrammatical. Use 'when it comes to lending money to others' to express willingness. Also 'anyone' conflicts with 'person' here. Suggestion: rephrase for clarity and natural collocation.

× And yes, I have helped many of my friends with money and they have also helped me with other things when I need it.

✓ And yes, I have helped many of my friends with money, and they have also helped me with other things when I needed it.

The first clause correctly uses present perfect 'have helped' for past experiences relevant now. The subordinate clause 'when I need it' mixes present with past context; since referring to past reciprocal help, use 'when I needed it' or change earlier tense. Also 'it' refers to 'help', which is acceptable but can be clearer as 'when I needed help.' Suggestion: use consistent tense and clearer reference: 'when I needed help.'