WebsitesPart 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

What kinds of websites do you often visit?

Candidato

I usually visit the academic websites that published so many papers because I want to learn some experience from it and also I need to make it as a reference materials to my devastation.

Examinador

What is your favourite website?

Candidato

My favorite website is the Google Scholar that from this website I can see so many kinds of published papers, research papers and also I can gain more knowledge from it and also I can make it as a reference materials when I do it in my destination.

Examinador

Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?

Candidato

I don't think they have some big changes to the website design, it's just can collect some new articles that published recently.

Examinador

What kinds of websites are popular in your country?

Candidato

I think some most popular website in my country is Google Scholar because it contained so many kind kinds of different published research papers and it's very useful. And when I write some for me, when I write some assignments, I usually use the papers published in Google Scholar as a reference.

Examinador

Do you prefer getting information from websites or books?

Candidato

Yeah, I really like to get information from books or website because it's very useful. And when I write the assignment or some articles, I need to put some reference. So I need to search the reference for on the Google Scholar or other books as a reference list. I think it's very useful and it really supports my argument.

Examinador

Would you like to have your own website?

Candidato

I don't have any plan to make my own website because it's really much difficult for me. Because if you want to make your own website you need to buy some domain and also you need to study the some code. So it's much difficult for me and really takes a long time.

Examinador

What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies?

Candidato

I think the website really helps me for my studying because when I'm prepared for the out speaking test, I usually need to search some informations on the website such as how to calculate your final score and if you want to get a high score, what aspect should you prepare for a while. So that's really helped me a lot because in the on the website you can see.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 6.0Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

What kinds of websites do you often visit?

Puntuación: 48.0

Sugerencia: 回答需要更自然、简洁并且语法正确。应直接回答问题(主题句),随后提供一到两个具体细节并使用连词使表达更连贯。例如:说明具体网站类型、用途或频率,避免拼写和搭配错误(如“reference materials”,“devastation”应为“research”或“studies”)。注意时态和冠词的使用。

Ejemplo: I often visit academic websites that host research papers, such as Google Scholar and JSTOR. I use them to learn new methods and to find sources for my assignments, so I check them several times a week.

What is your favourite website?

Puntuación: 50.0

Sugerencia: 回答要更简洁并修正重复与语法错误。先给出直接答案,然后用一两句具体说明为什么喜欢该网站,使用连接词(because, so, therefore)。避免冗余短语(例如重复的“also”)并用准确词汇(“reference materials”改为“references”或“sources”,删掉不明词“destination”)。

Ejemplo: My favourite website is Google Scholar because it provides access to many academic papers. I use it to learn about current research and to find reliable sources for my essays.

Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?

Puntuación: 44.0

Sugerencia: 回答需更准确并使用更自然的句式。先直接回答(Yes/No),然后解释变化的具体方面(内容、界面、功能等)。注意语法(主谓一致、被动语态)并用连词连接句子。

Ejemplo: No, I haven't noticed major design changes to the websites I use. They mainly update by adding new articles and papers rather than changing the layout.

What kinds of websites are popular in your country?

Puntuación: 46.0

Sugerencia: 回答应更概略并提供具体例子来支持观点。直接陈述哪些类型的网站流行(学术、社交、购物等),然后举例并说明原因。注意单复数、时态和减少重复。

Ejemplo: Academic websites like Google Scholar are very popular because researchers and students use them to find published papers. Social media and news websites are also widely used for daily information and communication.

Do you prefer getting information from websites or books?

Puntuación: 52.0

Sugerencia: 回答需要更有组织:先表明偏好,然后给出具体原因和例子。避免重复并改正搭配错误(‘get information from websites or books’改为‘from websites rather than books’或并列两者)。使用连接词使论点更流畅。

Ejemplo: I prefer getting information from both websites and books, depending on the topic. For academic work I often use Google Scholar for recent studies, while for background theory I consult textbooks because they are more systematic.

Would you like to have your own website?

Puntuación: 54.0

Sugerencia: 回答应简洁并提供具体原因与可能的替代方案。避免重复句子并改正语法(如冠词和冗余词)。可以提到如果将来有计划会做什么。

Ejemplo: I don't plan to create my own website because it seems difficult and time-consuming; you need to buy a domain and learn coding. However, I might use website builders like Wix if I needed a simple personal site in the future.

What have you learned from websites that help with your life or studies?

Puntuación: 50.0

Sugerencia: 回答应更清晰并提供具体例子和结果。先说明总体帮助,再举一两个明确示例(例如找技巧、评分标准或练习题),并用连词组织。注意拼写(information单数不可数)和表达准确性。

Ejemplo: Websites have helped me prepare for speaking tests by offering scoring criteria and practice tips. For example, I used official guides and sample answers online to understand what examiners look for and improved my timing and fluency.

Gramática

22: Article errors

× I usually visit the academic websites that published so many papers because I want to learn some experience from it and also I need to make it as a reference materials to my devastation.

I usually visit academic websites that publish so many papers because I want to learn from them and also I need to use them as reference materials for my research.

错误类型:冠词与可数名词使用错误,以及代词指代不清和词语搭配错误。 说明:1) “the academic websites”中不需要定冠词“the”或应该改为特指网站,此处泛指学术网站应为“academic websites”。 2) “that published”时态应与现在习惯相符,改为现在时“that publish”。 3) “learn some experience from it”搭配不当,改为“learn from them”;“it”应与复数网站不一致,改为“them”。 4) “make it as a reference materials to my devastation”语义与用词错误,改为“use them as reference materials for my research”。 建议:注意可数名词单复数和代词指代一致;按语义选择正确短语(learn from, use as reference, research)。

1: Singular and plural issue

× My favorite website is the Google Scholar that from this website I can see so many kinds of published papers, research papers and also I can gain more knowledge from it and also I can make it as a reference materials when I do it in my destination.

My favorite website is Google Scholar. From this website I can see many kinds of published research papers, gain more knowledge from them, and use them as reference materials when I work on my projects.

错误类型:单复数与冠词使用错误、代词指代错误及冗长句子。 说明:1) 不需要定冠词“the Google Scholar”,正确为“Google Scholar”。 2) “so many kinds of published papers, research papers”重复且冗余,简化为“many published research papers”。 3) “gain more knowledge from it”中“it”应指复数papers,改为“from them”。 4) “make it as a reference materials”中“it”与“materials”数不一致,且应使用“use ... as reference materials”。 5) “when I do it in my destination”不通,推测为“when I work on my projects/assignments”,已改为“work on my projects”。 建议:保持名词单复数一致,避免冗余重复,使用正确代词与常用固定搭配(use ... as reference materials)。

6: Present tense issue

× I don't think they have some big changes to the website design, it's just can collect some new articles that published recently.

I don't think there have been any major changes to the website design; it just collects new articles that are published recently.

错误类型:现在时与句子结构不当,以及代词与主语问题。 说明:1) 原句“they have some big changes to the website design”主语“they”不明确,改为存在结构“there have been any major changes”更自然。 2) “it's just can collect”语法错误,模态和助动词混用,应为“it just collects”。 3) “that published recently”缺少被动助动词,应为“that are published recently”。 建议:用正确的时态表达状态变化(have been),主语与动词一致,并使用被动结构表达“被发布”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think some most popular website in my country is Google Scholar because it contained so many kind kinds of different published research papers and it's very useful.

I think the most popular website in my country is Google Scholar because it contains so many different published research papers and it's very useful.

错误类型:介词/冠词与动词时态错误。 说明:1) “some most popular website”结构错误,正确为“the most popular website”表示最高级需用定冠词。 2) “contained”时态错误,应为一般现在时“contains”,因为在描述事实。 3) “so many kind kinds of different”重复啰嗦,简化为“so many different”。 建议:最高级前加定冠词,描述普遍事实用一般现在时,避免冗余短语。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× And when I write some for me, when I write some assignments, I usually use the papers published in Google Scholar as a reference.

When I write assignments, I usually use papers published on Google Scholar as references.

错误类型:量词与介词使用不当。 说明:1) “write some for me, when I write some assignments”重复且不通顺,合并为“When I write assignments”。 2) “papers published in Google Scholar”介词不当,应为“published on Google Scholar”。 3) “as a reference”与复数“papers”搭配更自然为“as references”。 建议:简化句子,使用正确介词(on Google Scholar),量词与名词数要一致。

4: Modal verb usage

× I don't have any plan to make my own website because it's really much difficult for me. Because if you want to make your own website you need to buy some domain and also you need to study the some code.

I don't have any plans to make my own website because it's really difficult for me. If you want to make your own website, you need to buy a domain and also learn some coding.

错误类型:情态动词/名词单复数与词汇搭配错误。 说明:1) “any plan”通常复数“any plans”。 2) “really much difficult”词序错误且用法不当,改为“really difficult”或“much more difficult”。 3) “buy some domain”冠词与数量不当,改为“buy a domain”。 4) “study the some code”不自然,常用表达为“learn some coding”或“learn to code”。 建议:注意情态与名词单复数,使用常见搭配(buy a domain, learn coding)。

5: Past tense issue

× So it's much difficult for me and really takes a long time.

So it's very difficult for me and it really takes a long time.

错误类型:过去时/词语程度副词使用不当。 说明:1) “much difficult”不正确,应该用程度副词“very”修饰形容词“difficult”。 2) 句首语境为一般现在时描述持续情况,用现在时“takes”是对的,但需要完整主语“it really takes a long time”。 建议:使用正确程度副词(very, quite)修饰形容词,保持句子完整。

8: Verb + -ing form

× I think the website really helps me for my studying because when I'm prepared for the out speaking test, I usually need to search some informations on the website such as how to calculate your final score and if you want to get a high score, what aspect should you prepare for a while.

I think the website really helps me with my studies because when I'm preparing for the speaking test, I usually need to search for information on the website, such as how to calculate the final score and which aspects I should prepare to get a high score.

错误类型:动词+ing形式及其他动词短语使用错误。 说明:1) “helps me for my studying”应为“helps me with my studies”。 2) “when I'm prepared for the out speaking test”时态与词序错误,应为“when I'm preparing for the speaking test”。 3) “search some informations”不可数名词information无复数,且应加介词“search for information”。 4) “what aspect should you prepare for a while”不通顺,改为“which aspects I should prepare to get a high score”。 建议:注意动词+ing用于进行时(preparing),information为不可数名词,使用正确疑问/从句结构。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× So that's really helped me a lot because in the on the website you can see.

So that's really helped me a lot because on the website you can see it.

错误类型:代词与介词短语误用、冗余词语。 说明:1) “in the on the website”重复且包含多余介词,应为“on the website”。 2) 句尾缺少明确指代,补上“it”或具体内容:“you can see it”或“you can see the information”。 建议:简化介词短语,确保句子末尾有明确指代或完整信息。

Vocabulario

BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
FinalLast; Irrevocable; Decider
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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