Websites— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms (e.g., "I research" → "I've been looking up" or "I use"), and avoid redundancy. Add one specific detail using a linking word to support your point (e.g., "for example" or "also").

Ejemplo: I've been using the Cambridge Dictionary website to look up vocabulary. It has clear pronunciations and definitions, and it also gives many example sentences, which help me understand how words are used in context.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence naming the site and avoid hesitations and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar (e.g., "I can easy to order" → "it's easy to order") and finish your thought. Provide one specific reason with a linking word (e.g., "because" or "and").

Ejemplo: My favourite website is a shopping site called Shinjini because it often runs special events and promotions. For example, I can order items easily and they deliver them quickly, which saves me time.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct subject-verb agreement ("websites have" not "website have") and avoid unclear phrases ("fly the top products"). Use linking words like "for example" correctly and give a concrete, specific example of a change.

Ejemplo: Yes. Websites I visit often update their layout and promotions during special events. For example, recently the home page highlighted top-selling products with discount banners during a festival sale.

Sugerencia: Make a clear topic sentence and avoid fillers. Use correct phrasing ("shopping websites are popular") and give a specific reason with a linking word ("because"), then add a brief example or comparison. Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences).

Ejemplo: Shopping websites are very popular in my country because they run many targeted advertisements and promotions. For example, during holidays people browse online marketplaces to compare deals and buy gifts.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference. Use correct comparative forms ("quicker" not "more quickly" in this context) and combine similar ideas into one coherent sentence with linking words ("because" and "for example").

Ejemplo: I prefer getting information from websites because they are more convenient and quicker to update. For example, I can read breaking news online immediately, whereas books take a long time to publish.

Sugerencia: Clarify your position (you said "No" then "I would like" — be consistent). Use correct conjunctions and smoother phrasing. State one clear reason and, if relevant, give a brief example or contrast using linking words like "although" or "because" properly.

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't like to have my own website because I think maintaining it would be difficult. Although AI tools can help build websites easily, I still don't want the responsibility of updating and managing it.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and correct phrases (unclear phrase "cup of caballeris"). Use accurate grammar ("I often use the Cambridge Dictionary website") and give specific examples of what you learn (e.g., pronunciation, example sentences). Use linking words like "for example" or "as a result" to show benefits.

Ejemplo: I often use the Cambridge Dictionary website, which has helped my English studies. For example, I learn pronunciations, discover example sentences, and study new vocabulary, which improves both my speaking and writing.

× Recently I research for some vocabularies, so I often use a Cambridge website to look up some words and I think the website is very good because you can check out pronunciation and the meaning and a lot of examples.

✓ Recently I have been researching some vocabulary, so I often use the Cambridge website to look up words. I think the website is very good because you can check pronunciation, meanings, and many examples.

Errors: 'research' should be present perfect continuous 'have been researching' to express recent ongoing action; 'vocabularies' is incorrect plural — use 'vocabulary' as an uncountable noun; 'a Cambridge website' is wrong article and specificity — use 'the Cambridge website'; 'check out pronunciation and the meaning and a lot of examples' has noun number and article issues and awkward listing. Suggestion: use correct tense to show recent activity, treat 'vocabulary' as uncountable, use 'the' for a known site, use plural nouns appropriately ('pronunciation, meanings, and many examples') and split into two sentences for clarity.

× My February website is uh, shopping site called Shinjini umm, they hold a lot of uh, events and I can easy to order and they deliver so fast and their products umm, are very useful. It may make a lot of.

✓ My favorite website is a shopping site called Shinjini. They hold many events, it is easy to order, they deliver very fast, and their products are very useful.

Errors: 'My February website' is incorrect word choice — likely 'favorite'; 'a shopping site called Shinjini' needs an article; 'they hold a lot of uh, events' better as 'they hold many events' (many is correct quantifier); 'I can easy to order' should be 'it is easy to order' (adjective/adverb error and sentence subject); 'so fast' is colloquial but acceptable as 'very fast'; final fragment 'It may make a lot of.' is incomplete and unclear. Suggestion: use 'favorite', correct quantifiers ('many'), use proper sentence subjects and verb forms, and remove incomplete fragments.

× Oh yes, sometimes they celebrate their products, get a prize or have important events to consumers. So their website have some changes. For example, recently I fly the top products is in the website.

✓ Oh yes. Sometimes they promote products, offer prizes, or have important events for consumers. So their website has some changes. For example, recently I saw the top products on the website.

Errors: 'celebrate their products' is awkward — use 'promote products'; 'have important events to consumers' should be 'have important events for consumers' (preposition error); 'their website have some changes' has subject-verb agreement and 'there be' type: use 'has'; 'recently I fly the top products is in the website' is ungrammatical — likely 'I saw the top products on the website'. Suggestion: use correct verbs for promotion, correct prepositions ('for'), ensure subject-verb agreement ('website has'), and use clear past tense ('saw') for a recent event.

× I would say a must be shopping websites, uh, because they are, uh, lots of ads that promotes consumers to buy things and products and and and and.

✓ I would say shopping websites are a must, because there are lots of ads that encourage consumers to buy products.

Errors: 'a must be shopping websites' mixes singular and plural; correct phrasing is 'shopping websites are a must' or 'are essential'; 'they are, uh, lots of ads' should be 'there are lots of ads' (there be issue and pronoun); 'ads that promotes' has subject-verb agreement—'ads' plural with 'promote'; 'buy things and products' is redundant. Suggestion: reorder to 'shopping websites are a must', use 'there are', match plural verbs, and avoid redundant nouns.

× I prefer getting information from websites because it's convenient and the speed is more quickly than books for example.

✓ I prefer getting information from websites because it's convenient and faster than books, for example.

Errors: 'the speed is more quickly than books' mixes noun/adverb forms and uses incorrect comparative structure. Use comparative adjective 'faster than books'. Suggestion: compare using adjective 'faster' and place example phrases appropriately.

× And if some thing important news and I need to know from the website, not a book.

✓ And if there is important news I need to know, I check the website, not a book.

Errors: sentence fragment and incorrect word order; missing 'there is' for news existence (there be issue) and awkward 'need to know from the website'. Suggestion: use 'if there is important news I need to know' and 'I check the website' to express source.

× No, I would like to have my own website because I think, uh, it's hard to maintain the website. Although these AI software is so, umm, gorgeous and available to develop a lot of uh, website that suits you, but I don't like it.

✓ No, I would not like to have my own website because I think it's hard to maintain. Although AI software is powerful and can help develop websites that suit you, I still don't want one.

Errors: contradiction: 'No, I would like to have' vs intended negative—should be 'would not like'; 'these AI software is' has number agreement—use 'AI software is' or 'these AI tools are'; 'gorgeous' is inappropriate adjective for software; 'available to develop a lot of website that suits you' has modal/ability and number errors—use 'can help develop websites that suit you'. Suggestion: use correct negation, match subject-verb number, choose appropriate adjectives, and use 'can' to indicate ability.

× As I mentioned, I often the cup of caballeris from the Cambridge dictionary websites and I find it very useful for my umm study English because I can do got the unknown words and learn the pronunciation and examples.

✓ As I mentioned, I often use the Cambridge Dictionary website and I find it very useful for my English study because I can look up unknown words and learn their pronunciation and example sentences.

Errors: 'I often the cup of caballeris' is garbled—should be 'I often use the Cambridge Dictionary website'; 'websites' should be singular 'website' when referring to one; 'my umm study English' -> 'my English study'; 'I can do got the unknown words' should be 'I can look up unknown words'; 'learn the pronunciation and examples' needs possessive 'their' and 'example sentences'. Suggestion: use clear verbs like 'use' and 'look up', correct noun order, and use possessive pronouns for word properties.