Websites— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and use linking words (for example, also, because). Correct common errors: "it's helped" → "it helps" or "it has helped", "beside" → "besides/also", and avoid "any" before countable nouns when not appropriate.

Ejemplo: I often visit YouTube because it helps me find a wide range of content. For example, I use it to discover new songs and to watch detailed cooking tutorials, which make it easy to try recipes at home.

Sugerencia: Give one clear main choice and then briefly mention other sites. Improve grammar and cohesion: "My favorite website is YouTube because..." Use linking words (also, besides, for example) correctly and avoid repeating phrases like "anything I want".

Ejemplo: My favourite website is YouTube because I can watch videos on almost any topic. I also use messaging apps like WeChat and WhatsApp to stay in touch with friends and family.

Sugerencia: Answer more directly and provide a specific example of a change. Fix grammar: "websites" plural, "they're up to date" and use linking words such as "for example" or "for instance." A stronger response explains why updates matter to you.

Ejemplo: Yes, many websites update regularly. For example, the news site I follow refreshes its layout and adds new features every few months, which keeps the content accurate and easy to read.

Sugerencia: Be precise and grammatical. Start with a topic sentence naming a few popular sites, then give one specific reason for each. Correct errors: "The most popular websites in my country are...", "Besides that", "Facebook is also popular."

Ejemplo: In my country, messaging apps like WhatsApp are the most popular because people use them to communicate daily. Social networks such as Facebook are also widely used to connect with people around the world.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference and support it with two specific reasons. Correct grammar: "information" is uncountable, so: "get information on the Internet"; use linking words like "because" and "so"; avoid "connect it."

Ejemplo: I prefer getting information from websites because it is faster and I can access it anytime on my phone. For example, I often look up news articles and tutorials online when I need quick answers.

Sugerencia: State your opinion clearly and give a concise reason or two. Fix grammar: "I don't want to have my own website because it costs money and I don't have content to share." Use linking words like "because" and avoid repetition "connect to connect."

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't like my own website because it costs money to maintain and I don't have enough content to publish. Instead, I prefer using social media to share updates with friends quickly.

Sugerencia: Provide specific examples of what you learned and how you applied it. Improve grammar and word choice: "I have learned", "besides that", "latest news" (no repeated "most latest"), and "convenient". Use linking phrases to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I have learned many new words and phrases from online articles and videos. For example, I learned technical terms for my studies and I regularly read news websites to stay updated, which helps me participate in class discussions.

× I often use YouTube because it's helped me to find anything I want, for example any song that I can find it there.

✓ I often use YouTube because it has helped me find anything I want; for example, I can find any song there.

The original uses contraction 'it's' incorrectly with 'helped' creating unclear tense and includes an unnecessary object 'it' after 'find'. Use present perfect 'has helped' to show past action affecting the present. Remove the extra 'it' after 'find' and reorder for natural English.

× Beside that I also can find some any cooking recipe in YouTube that's helped me get everything easily.

✓ Besides that, I can also find many cooking recipes on YouTube that have helped me get things done easily.

Use 'Besides' not 'Beside that' for linking ideas. 'In YouTube' is incorrect; use 'on YouTube'. 'Some any' is ungrammatical; choose 'many' or 'some' and make 'recipe' plural if generic. Use present perfect 'have helped' to match effect on present.

× My favorite website would be YouTube because I can browse anything I want.

✓ My favorite website would be YouTube because I can browse anything I want.

This sentence is actually correct; no grammatical change needed. It uses appropriate modal 'would' and present ability 'can'.

× Beside that I also use some of the chatting social media, for example WeChat and WhatsApp.

✓ Besides that, I also use some chatting social media apps, for example WeChat and WhatsApp.

Use 'Besides' as the linking adverb and 'chatting social media' is awkward; 'chatting social media apps' or 'messaging apps' is clearer. Added comma for clarity.

× Is is because it can help me to connect with others easily.

✓ It is because they help me connect with others easily.

The original has a typo 'Is is' and mismatched singular 'it' referring to multiple apps; use 'they' and plural verb 'help'. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help'.

× Most of the website I use will automatically update every few months, so I think it is quite good to use it because they're up to the date anytime.

✓ Most of the websites I use update automatically every few months, so I think they are quite good to use because they're up to date at any time.

'Most of the website' should be plural 'websites'. Use simple present 'update' for regular actions. 'They're up to the date' should be 'up to date' and 'anytime' better as 'at any time'. Match pronouns: 'websites' -> 'they'.

× The most popular website are popular in my country is WhatsApp the most common one.

✓ The most popular website in my country is WhatsApp; it is the most common one.

Original repeats 'popular' and has subject-verb disagreement: 'website are' is wrong. Use singular subject 'website' with 'is'. Rephrase to avoid redundancy and clarify meaning.

× Most of the people use WhatsApp to connect with others.

✓ Most people use WhatsApp to connect with others.

'Most of the people' is wordy; 'Most people' is more natural. No other grammatical change required.

× Beside that, the Facebook social media apps is also quite popular because it can to connect with people worldwide.

✓ Besides that, the Facebook social media app is also quite popular because it connects people worldwide.

Use 'Besides' and singular 'app' if referring to Facebook. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'can'. Better: use simple present 'connects' or plural 'apps' with 'they connect'. Ensure pronoun/verb agreement.

× To be honest I prefer to get all those information on Internet because it is fast and also I can connect it anytime anywhere I want.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to get all that information on the Internet because it is fast and I can access it anytime, anywhere I want.

'All those information' should be 'all that information' or 'that information' because 'information' is uncountable. Use 'on the Internet' with definite article. 'Connect it' is incorrect; use 'access it'. Add commas for readability.

× I do not want to have my own website because need money to pay it and also I have nothing to share it with others.

✓ I do not want to have my own website because it would cost money to maintain and I have nothing to share on it with others.

Add subject 'it' or rephrase 'need money to pay it' to 'it would cost money to maintain'. 'Have nothing to share it with others' is incorrect: use 'share on it' or 'share with others'. Modal 'would' fits hypothetical cost.

× I rather to use the social media connect to connect with others rather than using my own website.

✓ I prefer to use social media to connect with others rather than using my own website.

Use 'prefer' not 'rather to'; 'rather' should be 'rather than' structure. Remove duplicated 'connect'. 'Social media' without 'the' is natural when speaking generally.

× I learned a lot of new vocabulary.

✓ I have learned a lot of new vocabulary.

Present perfect 'have learned' is preferable to show learning over time up to now. Both past simple and present perfect can be acceptable, but present perfect better fits the context of ongoing benefit.

× Beside that, I also learn a lot of latest news, which allowed me to find out the most latest news anywhere, anytime I want to.

✓ Besides that, I also learn a lot of the latest news, which allows me to find the newest updates anywhere, anytime I want to.

Use 'Besides' and 'the latest news' with article. Use present simple 'learn' with 'which allows' to show present result. 'Most latest' is redundant; use 'newest' or 'latest'. 'Find out' can be shortened to 'find'.

× So I think it's quite convenience for me to connect.

✓ So I think it's quite convenient for me to connect.

Use adjective 'convenient' not noun 'convenience' after 'quite'. Ensure appropriate form when describing something as easy or suitable.