Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 答えの構成を明確にし、文法と語彙の正確さを高めましょう。まず主題文で簡潔に答え、その後に1〜2文で具体的な理由や結果（何が起きたか、どのように影響したか）を述べると良いです。文法面では時制（過去形）や動詞の一致、冠詞の使用に注意してください。また“affect”は過去形“affected”や名詞“had a big impact on”の方が自然です。例を参考に、文を短めに分けて明瞭に話す練習をして下さい。

Ejemplo: Yes. A poster advertising a local sports club made a strong impression on me when I was a child. After seeing it, I joined a tennis club and started playing regularly. That decision had a big impact on my life because it helped me make friends and stay active.

Sugerencia: 回答を直接的かつ文法的に正確にし、具体例を一つ挙げる練習をしてください。まず“Yes, I do.”と答え、続けてどこでよく見るか（電車の内装、駅のポスターなど）を具体的に述べます。複数形や冠詞（a/an/the）、動詞の一致（there is → there are）に注意し、不明瞭な語句（"advertising searchers"）は避けてください。接続詞で理由や例をつなぐと論理的になります。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often see many advertisements inside trains and at stations. For example, there are posters and digital screens promoting local sports clubs and study programs, which are hard to miss during my commute.

Sugerencia: 簡潔に主張を述べ、その後に理由を一つ加えましょう。副詞は複数形や位置に注意（"sometimes"）。“不定詞”や“名詞句”の使い方（"an opportunity"）も確認してください。過去の心境変化を説明する際は、過去形と語順を正しく使い、接続詞（because, so）でつなげると自然です。具体的な状況（どの広告で、どのように興味が湧いたか）を短く添えると説得力が増します。

Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes. Advertisements can change my thinking. For instance, I wasn't interested in tennis before, but after seeing an ad for a local tennis club on the train, I decided to try it and grew to enjoy the sport.

Sugerencia: 好みを述べたら、なぜそれが好きなのかを理由と具体的な特徴で示しましょう。代名詞の一致（"her"は不適切、"short video ads"など）と語順、動詞の時制（"what they say"）に注意してください。情報の利点を2つ程度に絞り、接続詞（because, so, therefore）で明確に繋げると良いです。

Ejemplo: I prefer short video advertisements. They quickly share key information and are easy to remember, so I often recall the product shortly after watching. Also, their entertaining format makes them more engaging.

Sugerencia: まず簡潔に“Yes, I do.”と答え、その後に具体的な状況を明確に述べましょう。代名詞の誤用（"her" → "the" or "those"）、単語の選択（"apologizing" は不適切、"skippable" 或いは "pre-roll" ads）を修正してください。頻度を表す語（often, every day）を使う位置にも注意し、文を2〜3文に分けて話すとより自然です。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I use YouTube a lot and, because I don't have a paid subscription, I often see pre-roll ads before videos. I usually watch those short ads several times a day.

× There was a poster to invite the people to join a Sports Club and it affect all my life a lot because after I saw that poster I decided to join a Tennis Club.

✓ There was a poster inviting people to join a sports club and it affected my life a lot because after I saw that poster I decided to join a tennis club.

The original uses 'to invite' where a participial adjective 'inviting' is more natural to describe the poster (reduced relative clause). 'it affect all my life' has wrong verb form and unnatural phrasing: 'affect' needs past tense 'affected' to agree with 'was'/'saw'. Also 'the people' is unnecessary and 'Sports Club/Tennis Club' should be lowercase unless proper names. Suggestion: use participle phrases to make descriptions concise and use past tense consistently for past events. (Note: correction addresses participle usage and past tense agreement.)

× Yes, either, especially in training.

✓ Yes, especially on trains.

'Either' is incorrect here; likely intended 'as well' or nothing. 'in training' is wrong preposition and noun: advertisements appear 'on trains'. Move 'especially' before the prepositional phrase for natural adverb placement. Suggestion: place adverb before the prepositional phrase: 'especially on trains.'

× I think there is many other advertising searchers are studying club or sport club.

✓ I think there are many other advertisements about study clubs or sports clubs.

The original is ungrammatical and mixed structures ('there is many' wrong agreement and 'advertising searchers are studying' is incoherent). Correct by using 'there are' for plural and replace unclear nouns: 'advertisements' (countable) and clarify 'study club' or 'sports club'. Suggestion: keep subject-verb agreement and use clear noun phrases: 'advertisements about study clubs or sports clubs.'

× Yes, I do sometime.

✓ Yes, I do sometimes.

Adverb 'sometimes' is the correct adverb form; 'sometime' is an adverb meaning 'at an indefinite time' and is rarely used in this context. Place it after the verb for natural word order. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' to indicate frequency: 'Yes, I do sometimes.'

× It became a opportunity to change my thinking because before I saw the advertising in training I didn't interested in tennis, but after I saw it, I changed my mind.

✓ It became an opportunity to change my thinking because before I saw the advertising on trains I wasn't interested in tennis, but after I saw it, I changed my mind.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound ('opportunity'). 'didn't interested' is incorrect; use 'wasn't interested' or 'was not interested' for the adjective 'interested' and past state. 'in training' wrong preposition—use 'on trains.' Suggestion: use 'wasn't interested' for past states and correct articles: 'an opportunity.'

× I like her short video advertising because the short video advertising can share the specific information in a short time so it is easy to remember what they saying after I saw it and it's fun.

✓ I like short video advertisements because they can share specific information in a short time, so it is easy to remember what they say after I watch them and they're fun.

Incorrect pronoun 'her' used for advertisements; use 'short video advertisements' or 'them'. 'they saying' should be 'they say'. Tense and reference mismatch: use present tense 'say' for general statements and match pronouns ('them', 'they', 'they're'). Also use plural 'advertisements' and 'watch' rather than 'saw' for ongoing habit. Suggestion: use correct pronouns and consistent tense/pronoun agreement: 'they can... what they say... I watch them.'

× Yes I do because I have a YouTube application and if I don't pay for them I need to see her apologizing advertisement before I watch her videos.

✓ Yes, I do because I have the YouTube app and if I don't pay for it I have to watch the pre-roll advertisement before I watch videos.

Pronoun confusion: 'them' and 'her' used incorrectly for YouTube/app/videos/ads. Use 'it' for the app, and 'pre-roll advertisement' or 'advertisement' for the ad. Also modal phrasing: 'need to see' is better as 'have to watch' for obligation. Suggestion: use correct pronouns matching the noun they refer to and standard phrases: 'the YouTube app', 'pay for it', 'watch the advertisement.'

× So I watch her advertisement everyday.

✓ So I watch the advertisements every day.

Again 'her' is wrong pronoun; use 'the advertisements' or 'them'. 'everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverbial phrase) — here use 'every day'. Suggestion: use 'every day' to indicate frequency and correct pronouns: 'I watch the advertisements every day.'