Art— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler sounds and keep within 3–4 sentences. Use correct verb forms (e.g., "my drawings are", "I enjoy", "I wanted", "I do drawings").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy drawing a lot. When I was a child I wanted to become an art student because I loved sketching landscapes and characters. Now I mainly draw for fun when I have free time, which helps me relax and practice my skills.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first and then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct verb forms and word choice ("visit exhibitions", "people's drawings" or "artists' work"). Avoid vague phrases like "like galleries."

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit galleries because they display artists' work and inspiring landscapes. Also, when I visit exhibitions I learn about different art styles and cultural contexts, which broadens my understanding of art.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid repetition. Use conditional sentences correctly ("If I had the chance, I would attend art classes"). Mention specific types of classes or topics you want to learn to make your answer more concrete. Fix grammar: "it is a pity", "attend art classes", "improve my skills."

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to learn more about art, but currently I don't have enough time. If I had the chance in the future, I would attend painting and life-drawing classes to improve my technique and learn about colour theory.

Sugerencia: Clarify unclear words ("Troy" likely meant "art"). Start with a clear topic sentence and then give specific examples of activities you did (e.g., painting, carving). Use past tense consistently and avoid fillers. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, drawing was one of the subjects at my elementary school, and I enjoyed it a lot. Our teachers had us paint, draw still lifes and do simple carving projects, which helped me develop basic skills. Even now, even though my school no longer offers art classes, I would like to join one to continue learning.

× Well yes, even though sometimes my drawing are not that good but I still enjoying it so much.

✓ Well, yes. Even though sometimes my drawings are not that good, I still enjoy them so much.

Use plural 'drawings' for multiple items (adjective/plural noun choice) and correct verb form 'enjoy' (present simple) to match subject; also replace 'it' with 'them' to agree with plural noun. Add commas and split into clearer clauses for fluency.

× Uh, when I was a kid I was so into drawing that I even want to be an art student but right now I just doing drawing for like fun and when I'm bored.

✓ Uh, when I was a kid I was so into drawing that I even wanted to be an art student, but right now I just do drawings for fun and when I'm bored.

Use past tense 'wanted' to agree with 'when I was a kid'. For current habitual action use present simple 'do' not 'doing'. Use plural 'drawings' or 'drawing' as a general activity; here 'do drawings' or 'draw for fun' are correct. Add comma before 'but' for clarity.

× Oh, I would love to 'cause I found that the galleries always provide me with beautiful and amazing landscapes from people drawings and I also learn so much about the art culture when I visiting different exhibition and like galleries.

✓ Oh, I would love to, because I find that galleries always provide me with beautiful and amazing landscapes from people's drawings, and I also learn so much about art culture when I visit different exhibitions and galleries.

Replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because'. Change tense 'found' to present simple 'find' when describing a general truth. Use possessive 'people's drawings'. Use base verb 'visit' after 'when' (not 'visiting'). Use plural 'exhibitions'. These corrections fix modal/tense and noun form mismatches.

× Yes, I really want to learn more about it since I am really into art right now but I don't have like enough time so that was kind of pity for me.

✓ Yes, I really want to learn more about it since I'm really into art right now, but I don't have enough time, so it's kind of a pity for me.

Maintain present tense for current situation: 'it's kind of a pity' not 'was'. Remove filler 'like' and add article 'a' before 'pity'. These changes correct tense and article usage.

× If I had a chance in the future, I would love to visiting like I I would love to attending art classes to know more and like being better at my skills.

✓ If I had a chance in the future, I would love to visit; I would love to attend art classes to learn more and become better at my skills.

After 'would love to' use the base verb (infinitive) not the -ing form: 'visit' and 'attend'. Use 'learn' instead of 'know' and 'become better at my skills' rather than 'being better' for correct verb forms and collocations.

× Well, Troy was once of the subjects in my school, so yes, I was learning drawing back when I was in elementary school.

✓ Well, art was one of the subjects at my school, so yes, I learned to draw back when I was in elementary school.

Replace incorrect 'Troy' with 'art' (likely intended). Use 'one of the subjects' (correct word order) and 'at my school'. Use past simple 'learned to draw' for past habit rather than 'was learning drawing' which is ungrammatical.

× Teachers always make me do paintings or like carving things that I'm so, so in love with.

✓ Teachers always had us do paintings or carve things that I was really fond of.

Change 'make me do' to 'had us do' or 'made me do' for past tense; use 'carve' base verb parallel to 'do paintings'. Replace 'in love with' with 'fond of' for more natural collocation. Adjust tense to past ('was') to match context.

× Uh, even though I don't have art class anymore, I would love to attend one.

✓ Uh, even though I don't have art classes anymore, I would love to attend one.

Use plural 'art classes' or 'an art class'. 'Art class' singular is acceptable but plural is more natural when speaking generally. No tense change needed; this aligns with present simple for current state.