Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (uh, umm) and vague phrases like "offers for there." Use precise vocabulary (e.g., goals, ambitions).

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually remember my dreams. For example, I often dream about my future career, and those dreams motivate me to study harder and set long-term goals.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear reason with one brief example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and avoid awkward phrases such as "my property." Replace with "personal" or "private." Keep sentences short and grammatical.

Ejemplo: No, I usually don't share my dreams because they are very personal. For instance, I keep my career plans private, although I sometimes discuss general goals with close friends.

Sugerencia: Be specific about what you mean by "special meanings." Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because", "for example"). Correct grammar: match subjects and verbs and avoid repeating ideas. Provide one clear opinion and one brief reason or example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I think positive dreams often reflect our hopes or ambitions because they show what we want to achieve. For example, dreaming about graduating reminds me to work hard at university.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, confident statement and explain how you plan to achieve your dreams with specific actions. Avoid incorrect phrases like "I drank more for dreams" and tense errors. Use simple, correct verbs (e.g., "work hard", "save money", "learn skills").

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true. To achieve them, I plan to study hard, gain practical experience through internships, and save money to support my projects.

× Yes, I remember my dreams, uh, because dreams are very important for me and umm, it is always necessary for living.

✓ Yes, I remember my dreams because dreams are very important to me and always necessary for life.

Incorrect use of 'for me' vs 'to me' and 'necessary for living' is unnatural. Use 'important to me' and 'necessary for life' or 'necessary for living' with a noun form. Also remove filler words. Maintain simple present tense to match question.

× Uh, when we are living, we also have uh, dreams in our life and we have offers for there.

✓ When we are alive, we have dreams in our lives, and sometimes we receive opportunities related to them.

'When we are living' is awkward; use 'when we are alive'. 'Dreams in our life' should be plural 'in our lives'. 'We have offers for there' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely means 'we receive opportunities related to them'. Restructure the sentence for clarity.

× No, I would not like to share my dreams with others because it is my property like I always keep in my mind and so I did not interest to telling someone and I have never interested in other dreams.

✓ No, I do not want to share my dreams with others because they are personal; I keep them to myself, and I am not interested in telling people or in other people's dreams.

Mix of modal and tense errors: 'would not like' is okay in some contexts but here simple present 'do not want' is clearer. 'It is my property' is odd for dreams; use 'they are personal'. 'I did not interest to telling someone' is incorrect structure; use 'I am not interested in telling people'. Maintain consistent present tense.

× Yes, if the dreams are very good, it has special meanings.

✓ Yes, if the dreams are very good, they have special meanings.

Subject 'dreams' is plural, so verb must be plural 'have' and pronoun should be 'they' not 'it'.

× So I like also good dreams in my memory.

✓ So I also like to remember good dreams.

Original word order and phrasing are awkward ('like also good dreams in my memory'). Use infinitive 'to remember' and place 'also' before verb for natural English.

× I prefer that dreams are very important for living and we also trying to fulfill it.

✓ I believe dreams are important for life, and we should try to fulfill them.

'Prefer that dreams are very important for living' is unnatural; 'believe' fits meaning. 'We also trying' lacks auxiliary 'are' or 'should'; use 'we should try'. 'It' refers to plural 'dreams', so use 'them'. Keep present modal 'should' for advice.

× Yes, I also thought that I want to make my dreams come true.

✓ Yes, I also think that I want to make my dreams come true.

Mix of past 'thought' and present 'want' is inconsistent. Use present 'think' to match current desire. Maintain present tense throughout the sentence.

× I drank more for dreams and I also want to fulfilled it with my efforts and my ability to do come true.

✓ I worked hard for my dreams, and I also want to fulfill them with my efforts and abilities to make them come true.

'Drank more for dreams' is incorrect idiom; likely intended 'worked hard'. 'Want to fulfilled' mixes infinitive and past participle; use 'want to fulfill'. 'It' should be 'them' for plural 'dreams'. 'Do come true' is redundant; use 'make them come true'.