Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 语法和时态需要纠正，回答要更自然简洁并有主题句。尽量少于五句，使用连接词使表达连贯，提供具体细节或例子来支持观点。例如把“always dreams”改为“often have dreams”；把复杂或重复的部分删减或合并。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often have nightmares in which someone is trying to kill me. These dreams usually make me wake up suddenly and feel terrified. I once woke up right as the attacker caught me, which left me feeling anxious all morning. I looked up the meaning online and it suggested that such dreams can be related to high stress.

Sugerencia: 注意主谓一致和时态，回答应先给出直接回应的主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持。使用连接词如“so”或“for example”来衔接例子。避免拼写和语法错误（e.g., “shares”→“share”, “I am killing”→“I was being killed”）。

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually share my dreams with my mother and close friends. I often text them right after I wake up, especially if it was a frightening nightmare. For example, last weekend I dreamt I was being attacked by a bear, so I immediately told my mom about it.

Sugerencia: 回答内容重复且句子冗长，需更直接地表达观点并给出具体例子或原因。注意语法（e.g., "we had a book"→"we have a book"；"fallen"需改为"fall"在句子中作名词化则用"falling"）。用两个或三个句子清晰说明看法并举例。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe dreams can have meanings and people often interpret them. For example, many books and websites here say that falling in a dream can indicate stress or anxiety. Because of that, I usually check online or consult a book when I have a strange dream.

Sugerencia: 表达不够自然，包含重复和语法错误（如两次"want"、"anyone of them"应为"any of them"）。先直接回答，然后用一两句解释原因，避免夸张不清或错误搭配（"going to death"→"going to die"）。

Ejemplo: No, I don't want my dreams to come true, because most of my dreams are nightmares. If a nightmare like being attacked or dying became real, it would be terrifying, so I hope they stay as dreams.

× Yes of course I always dreams that someone want to kill me in the world and I was so freaking out about this.

✓ Yes, of course. I always dream that someone wants to kill me in the world, and I get so freaked out about it.

句中“dreams”与主语“I”不一致，应使用单数动词“dream”。另外“someone want”主谓不一致，应为“someone wants”。时态和表达也需要调整为现在时“I always dream”和一般现在表达情绪“get so freaked out about it”。建议：主语是单数第一人称“I”时，动词用原形（I dream），当主语是第三人称单数（someone）时，动词需加-s（wants）。

× I always wake up from these dreams when I was killed by someone and I searched it online I found it means I have so much stress which affect me had those dreams.

✓ I always wake up from these dreams when I am killed by someone, and when I searched it online I found it means I have a lot of stress that makes me have those dreams.

原句混合了现在时和过去时，且第三人称单数形式错误（was killed 改为被动现在时 am killed 来配合一般现在时的“always wake up”）。另外“affect me had those dreams”结构不正确，应改为“that makes me have those dreams”。建议：保持时态一致，根据语境使用一般现在时和正确的被动结构。

× Definitely. I always shares my dream with my mom and my friends, especially when I do some awful dreams.

✓ Definitely. I always share my dreams with my mom and my friends, especially when I have some awful dreams.

“shares”与主语“I”不一致，应为“share”。“my dream”在此为泛指多次发生的梦，改为复数“my dreams”。短语“do some awful dreams”不自然，应使用“have some awful dreams”。建议：注意动词与主语的一致以及常用搭配（have a dream）。

× At the time I wake up, I will send a message to them, tell them about my dream.

✓ When I wake up, I will send them a message to tell them about my dream.

原句时态和语序混乱。“At the time I wake up”可用“When I wake up”。将“send a message to them, tell them”合并为“send them a message to tell them”更自然。建议：注意从句连接词和动词短语的固定搭配。

× For instance, last weekend I dreamed that I am killing by a bear and I told my mom when I wake up.

✓ For instance, last weekend I dreamed that I was being killed by a bear, and I told my mom when I woke up.

描述过去的梦要用过去时：“dreamed”。被动语态应为“was being killed”或“was killed”。“when I wake up”应与过去时一致，改为“when I woke up”。建议：叙述过去的事件时，所有相关动词都应使用过去时。

× Of course, as I said, I always search my dream meaning online and in our country we had a book to tell you all the types of dream meaning and I know that when you dream you are fallen from a high place, It means you had a lot of stress and anxiety these days.

✓ Of course. As I said, I always search the meanings of my dreams online, and in our country we have a book that explains all the types of dream meanings. I know that when you dream you are falling from a high place, it means you have had a lot of stress and anxiety these days.

“search my dream meaning”应为“search the meanings of my dreams”。“we had a book”若指现在仍有，改为“we have a book”。“tell you all the types of dream meaning”改为“explains all the types of dream meanings”。“you are fallen”被动不正确，应为进行时“you are falling”。后半句语态和时态需改为现在完成“have had”或现在完成进行以表示近期的压力。建议：注意名词复数、现在/过去时的一致和常用表达。

× Actually no because I always dream something awful and I definitely don't want want anyone of them becoming true because when it come true it means I'm going to death which is not I want for.

✓ Actually no, because I always dream about something awful and I definitely don't want any of them to become true. If one came true it would mean I'm going to die, which is not what I want.

“dream something awful”应为“dream about something awful”或“have awful dreams”。双写“want want”是错误。短语“anyone of them”应为“any of them”。“becoming true”改为不定式“to become true”更合适。条件句从句要用与事实相反的虚拟语气“If one came true, it would mean...”。“going to death”不自然，应为“going to die”。最后“which is not I want for”语序错误，改为“which is not what I want”。建议：注意固定搭配、代词用法和虚拟语气的结构。