Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep answers concise and start with a clear topic sentence. Avoid repetition (e.g., repeating "remember the dreams I've had"). Use one or two specific supporting details and a linking word to improve coherence. Aim for varied vocabulary (e.g., "recall" instead of repeat "remember").

Ejemplo: Yes, I can often recall my dreams, but it depends on how rested I am. For example, when I wake up early after a full night's sleep I usually remember vivid dreams, whereas after a very tiring day I tend to forget them quickly.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer and avoid vague phrasing. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example") and give one concise reason and one brief example. Replace redundant phrases like "my opinion or my own perception" with a single phrase.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often share my dreams because I find other people's interpretations interesting. For example, a friend once suggested my recurring dream about running meant I felt stressed at work, which helped me reflect on my schedule.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then give a specific reason and an example. Clarify what you mean by "special meanings" and avoid vague qualifiers. Use linking words like "however" or "for instance" to make the logic clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think some dreams can have special meanings, but not every dream does. For instance, if someone keeps dreaming about an old house they grew up in, it might reflect unresolved feelings about their past.

Sugerencia: Start with a concise direct response and separate the two meanings of "dreams" using linking words. Avoid long vague clauses like "it may depend on what happens on the dream first." Give a clear example of a life goal and contrast with nighttime dreams briefly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to make my life dreams come true because I aim to become a teacher and feel fulfilled. However, I don't always wish to enact my nighttime dreams—for example, if I have a frightening nightmare I would not want it to happen in real life.

× I do remember the dreams I've had in the past, but it also depends on how tired my body is on how much I can remember once I wake up.

✓ I do remember the dreams I've had in the past, but how much I can remember once I wake up also depends on how tired my body is.

This sentence had awkward word order affecting present tense meaning and clarity. Reordering to 'how much I can remember once I wake up also depends on how tired my body is' places the present-tense clause 'I can remember' next to its dependence clause and improves coherence. Suggestion: keep the present-tense verbs close to their dependent clauses and avoid stacking 'depends on' phrases.

× Sometimes I'm too tired to remember the dreams I've had, regardless of how intense or crazy the things that happened, but sometimes I do remember them as well.

✓ Sometimes I'm too tired to remember the dreams I've had, regardless of how intense or crazy the things were, but sometimes I do remember them as well.

The clause 'how intense or crazy the things that happened' is wordy and mixes tenses. Using 'how intense or crazy the things were' aligns the past reference to dream events with a simple, clear past descriptor. Suggestion: simplify relative clauses and match tense for events that occurred in dreams.

× I like to share my dreams with other people to see how they perceive the meanings among my own opinions about it.

✓ I like to share my dreams with other people to see how they perceive the meanings in my own opinions about them.

The preposition 'among' is incorrect here; 'in' is a better choice for 'perceive the meanings in my opinions.' Also 'it' should agree in number with 'dreams,' so use 'them.' Suggestion: choose prepositions that match the relationship (meanings in opinions) and ensure pronoun number agreement.

× And I do love hearing about other people's dreams as well when they share what happens and ask for my opinion or my own perception on their dreams.

✓ And I do love hearing about other people's dreams as well when they share what happens and ask for my opinion or my perception of their dreams.

Using 'my own perception on their dreams' is awkward; 'perception of their dreams' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also 'opinion or my perception' is redundant to include 'my' twice; simplify to 'my opinion or perception.' Suggestion: use 'of' with 'perception' and avoid redundant possessives.

× I do believe some dreams have special meanings, but not all.

✓ I do believe some dreams have special meanings, but not all of them do.

Adding 'of them do' clarifies the contrast and completes the clause; otherwise the sentence is elliptical but acceptable. This is a present tense clarity improvement. Suggestion: finish contrast clauses explicitly to avoid ambiguity.

× It depends on the person whether a certain dream has happened to them before or it resembles something of importance that only they could understand.

✓ It depends on the person whether a certain dream has happened to them before or whether it resembles something important that only they can understand.

Replace 'it resembles something of importance' with 'whether it resembles something important' for natural phrasing. Use 'can' instead of 'could' because the sentence speaks generally in the present. Suggestion: prefer 'can' for present general ability and streamline phrases like 'something important.'

× That's a very interesting question because in a philosophical sense, I do want to make my dreams come true.

✓ That's a very interesting question because, in a philosophical sense, I do want to make my dreams come true.

This sentence is correct grammatically; only punctuation (comma) improves readability. Tense and verb forms are appropriate. Suggestion: add commas around the introductory phrase for clarity.

× This means the things that I want in my life that would make me feel successful or truly happy.

✓ This means the things that I want in my life that would make me feel successful or truly happy.

Sentence is grammatically correct in tense and structure. No change required. Suggestion: consider combining with the previous sentence for flow, but grammar is fine.

× But in the sense of the dreams that I have at night, it may depend on what happens on the dream first.

✓ But in terms of the dreams I have at night, it may depend on what happens in the dream first.

Use 'in terms of' instead of 'in the sense of' for natural phrasing and 'in the dream' rather than 'on the dream.' 'Happens in the dream' matches location preposition for events in a dream. Suggestion: use 'in' with 'dream' when describing events occurring within it.