Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more concise and clear, use a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Provide one or two specific supporting details and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I can't remember my dream from last night. In fact, I only recall that I dreamed but the details are vague, so I don't know who was in it or what happened. However, I often wake up with a vague feeling, which sometimes helps me guess the dream's mood.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (possessive/plural forms), and use linking words to structure your reasons. Add one concrete example to make the answer specific.

Ejemplo: Yes, I'm interested in other people's dreams. Because dreams can be confusing and different from reality, I like hearing how others interpret them; for example, my friend once dreamed of flying and said it made her feel free, which led to a fascinating discussion about our emotions.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence and explain with a specific, coherent example. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references; use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe some dreams can have special meanings. For instance, my mother once dreamed about my brother after he passed away, and that dream brought her comfort and a sense that he was still with us, so I think dreams can reflect strong emotions or messages.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, direct answer and explain reasons with better organization and fewer hesitations. Use linking words to contrast unwanted dreams with desired ones and provide a specific example of a dream you'd like to realize.

Ejemplo: I would like to make some of my dreams come true, but only the positive ones. For example, I often dream about traveling to new countries, and I would love to turn that into reality, whereas I wouldn't want negative or disturbing dreams to happen in real life.

× If we are talking about the dreams I had last night, I can say that I cannot remember it anymore.

✓ If we are talking about the dreams I had last night, I can say that I cannot remember them anymore.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'dreams' (plural). Use the plural pronoun 'them' for agreement. Also ensure pronoun number matches its antecedent. Suggestion: Identify the noun's number and choose corresponding pronoun (singular vs plural).

× All I know is that I had a dream, but I really don't.

✓ All I know is that I had a dream, but I really don't remember it.

The clause 'I really don't' is incomplete because the verb is missing; the listener must know what the speaker doesn't do. Add 'remember it' to complete the thought. Suggestion: Avoid leaving verbs implied in short answers; include the main verb for clarity.

× I really didn't recognize what happened in my dream, whom I am with my dream.

✓ I really didn't recognize what happened in my dream or who I was with in my dream.

The original mixes tenses and uses 'whom I am with my dream', which is ungrammatical. Use past tense 'was' to match 'didn't recognize' and correct word order: 'who I was with'. Use 'or' to connect the two unknowns. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and use correct clause order for people: 'who I was with'.

× Yeah, I'm interested in others dream because we all know that when we are dreaming we actually don't know what is happening, if it is free, if we are in, if we are in reality or not.

✓ Yeah, I'm interested in others' dreams because we all know that when we are dreaming we actually don't know what is happening, whether it is free, whether we are in it, or whether we are in reality or not.

Use the possessive form 'others'' or 'other people's' for 'others dream' and plural 'dreams'. Also replace repeated 'if' with 'whether' for clarity, and include 'in it' to specify where we might be. Suggestion: Use possessive apostrophe for others' and consistent connectors like 'whether'.

× So when someone talks about their dream, I am really interested because what happens in our dreams is really unique from reality.

✓ So when someone talks about their dream, I am really interested because what happens in our dreams is really different from reality.

'Unique' means one-of-a-kind and does not normally pair with 'from'; 'different from' more accurately expresses distinction between dreams and reality. Suggestion: Choose adjectives that fit the intended meaning; use 'different from' to compare.

× Yeah, I do believe that dreams have special meanings, especially when the time where my mom, when my mother dreamed about my brother what who had passed away.

✓ Yeah, I do believe that dreams have special meanings, especially the time when my mother dreamed about my brother who had passed away.

The original contains redundancies and incorrect relative pronoun usage: 'what who' is incorrect. Use 'the time when' and the relative pronoun 'who' for people. Remove duplicate 'my mom, when my mother'. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and use correct relative pronouns: 'who' for people; 'that/when' for times.

× I really believe that her dream has.

✓ I really believe that her dream did.

The verb 'has' is incomplete here and mismatches the past context. Use past tense 'did' (short for 'did have meaning') to match the earlier past event. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and use a verb that completes the thought ('did' as a substitute for 'did have significance').

× Yes, only if my dream is good 'cause a friend, uh, because usually I have dreams that are not into my interest so I don't want it to happen in reality.

✓ Yes, but only if my dream is good, because usually I have dreams that do not interest me so I don't want them to happen in reality.

The original is disfluent and uses 'are not into my interest' (unnatural) and singular pronoun 'it' for plural 'dreams'. Replace with 'do not interest me' and 'them'. Remove filler 'a friend, uh, because' unless meaningful. Suggestion: Use natural expressions: 'do not interest me' and match pronouns to number.

× All I want to happen in reality are those dreams.

✓ All I want to happen in reality are those dreams.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable, but to sound more natural: 'All I want to happen in reality are those dreams' matches plural subject 'those dreams' with plural verb 'are'. No change needed. Suggestion: Alternatively, use 'Those are the dreams I want to happen in reality' for clearer emphasis.